| "Matchmaker, Matchmaker, Make Me A Match" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Erin Cougar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this!! You should update really! I thoght it was funny I really liked the humor in it.
|
Title: PLEASE
Reviewed By: thegirwholovesyourstories On: September 27, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update i beg of u make it good longer mor CHAPTERS pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and visit my site just2hot4you.piczo.com
|
Title: Hiya
Reviewed By: KoolKat101 On: September 16, 2005 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please do another one it was so awsome
|
Reviewed By: § dragon_drop § On: July 26, 2005 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want to see how this turns out!!!!! its hilarious!check spelling though.. but sreiously keep writing it!
|
Title: I HEART SAND MONKEYS!
Reviewed By: FPC On: July 02, 2005 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMIGOSH! I HEART RAVIEL! Especially the invisible kind....an amazing story! Keep 'em coming! ~PEACE OUT~FPC
|
Reviewed By: MiraResQNU On: June 23, 2005 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please add more chapters- this is freakin' hilarious. I don't know who the sand monkeys are or Raviel but your descriptive style does not require the reader to have prior knowledge of these characters, particularly the latter. And thank you, thank you, thank you!!! for spell and grammar checking your story before submission. Lots of humor made this an easy and enjoyable read. Keep 'em coming! Mira
|
