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| "Magic and Beyblades" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | Reviewed By: Distant_Memories_Of_The_Past [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Shadow Hikari Age: a year younger then kai. Nicknames: Shae, neko , Midnight, and starlight. Hair: shoulder length black. Eyes: Deep purplish-lavender. Clothing: Baggy black pants with silver,red,and purple chains hanging off, black and red converse,black,purple,silver,and red gell braclets,spiked and studded dog collor, and spiked belt hanging limply off of her waist. She also wears a black hoodie that has zippers all over it, and a red shirt under it with black fishnet sleeves. Personality: Most of the time she is distant, and unreadalble, but you'll know when shes angry. Shes wary around strangers, but becomes kind and caring when you get to know her. She is really protective of her friends, and has a liking for Kai that is top secret. Paired with: Kai. Magic: Is in gryffondor house, and is half witch. Mostly uses fire and ice attacks. I hope you update!
| Reviewed By: sailor steller On: September 25, 2005 02:40 CDT
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name:hotaru shinjutsu house:slytherin paired with:kenny or ray hair:starry black eyes:deep purple shirt:pink strappless/sleavlees middrife belt:black and pink patern with straps that go from betl to shoulders skirt:pink and black checkerd skirt shoes:black punk shoes and nee hight socks you can find the picture in sailor-steller-moon's pictures as hotaru shinjutsu she also has striches on one of her checks
| Title: I want to be in the story, too!
Reviewed By: Kiche Minamoto On: June 08, 2005 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Kiche Minamoto Nickname: I don't have one! Age: 13 Description: tall, about 5' 7". Wears black pants with a short black t-shirt with a heart that says "True Love" under it, black and white tennis shoes, gray jacket zipped halfway to show the "True Love" thing, a necklace with a "K" in sapphire stones, and a white headband. Light-blue eyes, funny, weird sometimes, depressed on in a while, but otherwise very happy and hyper Paired with: Kai
| Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Crimson Strike Age:16Description:long Scarlett and blue hair either in pony or down blue gray and gold eyes wears a black shirt that says " I see dumb people" blue flaired jeans black boots fingerlist gloves a necklass with a gecko on it completly pierced ears crimson fingernails fair skin freckals 5'4 103pounds Personality: cold untrusting and you can never tell what she's feeling but once u gain her trust she is loyal passionate and easygoing smart the reason she like that is cause she watched her family die was taken in as a slave then became a mercenary or a time House:Griffandor/slytherin Pairing Kai please and thankyou if i can have him you pick
| Reviewed By: hieislover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 19:13 CDT
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oh and if kai is taken i would like to be paired with ray if heas taken pair me up with whoever im also in griffindor house or ill take slitherin and even if im not picked im still gonna read.
| Title: My oc
Reviewed By: hieislover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 19:07 CDT
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Name:Danielle Heaven Nickname:Angel Hair:black with red tips eyes:red House:mansion that has many gardens and is light blue in color and has black and silver walls on the inside Gender:female Likes:darkness being alone and beybladeing.Dislikes:pink and hyper people they always annoy her. Personality:shes gothic and ussually keeps to herself she isn't very talkative but beware when shes ticked off. Clothes:black baggy pants with chains and loads of zippers a black top that is sleeveless and says evilly angelic and black nikes paired with:kai Magic:i am part witch part human and i rarely use magic
| Reviewed By: Gothicchic76 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 17:05 CDT
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My oc's names is Isis Nakagawa she is 16-17 she can be very cold toward people, but when you get to know her she becomes warm and caring. She wears alot of black and green and sometimes silver. She had black dragon tattoo going around her arm. He's a major tomboy. she has midnight black hair with red, blue, and green streaks. She is in Gryffindor or Slytherin (ither one is fine)house. paired with either Tala or Kai (either one is fine), but if these two are taken then just choose someone for me that isn't taken. Thank-You
| Reviewed By: Gothicchic76 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 17:03 CDT
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My oc's names is Isis Nakagawa she is 16-17 she can be very cold toward people, but when you get to know her she becomes warm and caring. She wears alot of black and green and sometimes silver. She had black dragon tattoo going around her arm. He's a major tomboy. she has midnight black hair with red, blue, and green streaks. She is in Gryffindor or Slytherin (ither one is fine)house. paired with either Tala or Kai (either one is fine), but if these two are taken then just choose someone for me that isn't taken. Thank-You
| Reviewed By: Dragon_Isha On: April 22, 2005 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okaaay, here's the OC: Name: Isha Lynsgrave Age: 16-17 Description: She's cold to people she doesn't trust but normally very happy and cheery. She is a TOMBOY! Her favorite color is black and she mostly wears things that are black, blue, crimson or some other dark colors including silver. She wears a necklace around her neck and the pendant is that of a dragon that is silver with real sapphire eyes. She will get nasty if you insult her friends/family. She does beyblade and has a bitbeast called Aquilus Draconis but Aquilus or Draconis for short. It is a black dragon that breathes fire and its element is also fire. House: Slytherin Paired with: Kai or Tala (either one of them is fine)
| Title: OC
Reviewed By: Krisnshippo On: April 17, 2005 14:05 CDT
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Oc's for story../5/ Name: Alice Payne Age: 13 Description: Black baggy pants with chains and a purple tank top that reads (support wild life)"THROW A PARTY". (she looks like an angel in moon light)Long wavy black hair and red eyes.Bryan's height.Is shy and wares purple nail polish.loves animals,and great with teacher and friends.Is a great blader on team Angel. House: Gryffindor(spelling?) Paired With: Bryan . Name: Jesscia potter ( harry's long-lost sister) Age: 13 Description: pink hip hugger pants and white shirt that saids "i'm not a princess,boys just obay me".short brown hair and brown eyes.talkative and loud.go at blading and great at magic. make up:anything but black. House: Gryffindor Paired With: Oliver. Name: Jordan _______ (bryan'slong lost sis) Age: 13 Description: Black chothes(add some things if you like) and light purple hair. Blue eyes.is a goth.smiles some but not a lot. make-up:black eye liner,black lip stick, and black nail polish.Is Ian's height. House: Slytherin Paired With: Ian. Name: Heather Smartes Age: 13 Description: blue jeans and a white t-shirt.red hair,brown eyes.Very smart.love beyblading and magic.robert's height. make up: anything. House: Ravenclaw Paired With: Robert. Name: Abby Homes Age: 13 Description: blue jeand and pink shirt.truthful and loyal.orange hair and eyes. height same to Miguel.make-up:anything. House: Hufflepuff Paired With: Miguel. From Krisnshippo
| Reviewed By: Kitsuryuu On: April 07, 2005 06:21 CDT
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Name: Andromeda Zedaris (Nickname:"Kit") Age: whatever age you like that will fit although 16 sounds nice. :) Description: Tall: 5'7, skinny & pale. She's anemic (lacks iron in blood). A bit weak & yet strong willed, sly & stubborn. She always wears a long trenchcoat since she easily gets cold and a white halter top underneath with black jeans & boots. Her accessories are her chain belt, silver butterfly earring, a silver snake braclet (on her right forearm) & a silver necklace with a fox & dragon pendant. She has long black hair that she braids up & red brown eyes. Loves: chocolate, wine and books. Hates: Dogs and cockraches. Never leaves without her dagger with emeral inlaid on the black hilt. Almost always sarcastic in a humurous way and loves scheming for revenge. Last note: Very witty. (You can not use some of this stuff it its crappy :) I won't mind) House: Slytherin Paired With: Johnny or anyone else... ;)
| Reviewed By: Digital_nekos On: March 13, 2005 15:06 CST
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Am I too late to put in my OC?If I am that's okay! ^__^ Name: Keiko Kinomiya Nickname: Kei-chan Age:15-16 Description: Tyson's twin sister, but younger by 1 minute. Wears a blue and green hat, black tanktop, and green cargo pants. She has black hair, which she always wear in a ponytail, and emerald green eyes. She's a really shy person and doesn't really care what people think about her. Sarcastic and funny and respects her brother. (Even when he's acting like an idiot)Crazy and hyper when she's in a good mood. Best friends with Max and Kai and is never seen without her hat. Obsessed with the colors blue and green ^^;; House: Ravenclaw or Slytherin Paired With: Rei or Tala. Either one is fine with me ^___^
| Reviewed By: Ghost cheeth( Not signed in) On: February 26, 2005 19:06 CST
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Name: Maiza Age:15 Description:she Has Spikey red hair with Gold mixed in. her left eyes is red and the right is gold. Clothes: A Red chinses out, it looks a lot like Marah's but it has a golden dragon warped around it. Black boots Personality: Is Marah's Twin sister and is the darker wild side of the Pick haird witch ( Marah) She love to have fun and Do anything to get what she want. A really wild child, don't know when to stop playing and be real. Likes to pick on Snape a lot Other: She is a half-blood, and is Marash' twin Wand: 11 inch's, oak, Dragon heart sting Best sub: Care of Magic beast. House:Griffandor Paired With:Lee or Max( I would like Lee)
| Title: OC
Reviewed By: RedSirena [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 11:05 CST
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Name:Rayne Age: 15-16 Description:Long dark blue hair with two stand of hair that frame her face. she wears dark purple quater lenght trousers and black trainers. along with a chinese dress on top which has two long splits on either side. she also has two red wrist bands. she serious but also funny. she sees beyond peoples outer exteriors and doesn't like to form judgments. she likes to see good team work, but also see that people need to be alone. she knows there is a time for work and play. she likes to beyblade and to pratice martial arts. she loves to study people, and found there weak point... not that she uses it against them but just so that if they know she'll be there only to listen. House: G/S Paired With: Kai (if possible) or Tala even though i would prefer Kai
| Reviewed By: Angelspainme On: February 21, 2005 17:52 CST
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m'ok
| Reviewed By: Ice Flame *not logged in* On: February 21, 2005 08:08 CST
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opp's I meant has ear's pierced twice not eyes. O and she doesn't get along wiv Draco very much. She h8's him. She is also fluent in 14 different lanagues
| Reviewed By: Ice Flame *not logged in* On: February 21, 2005 08:06 CST
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Name: Mimi Winsor Age: 16 Hair: Sugar pink, mid-lenght. Eyes: Sapphire blue Clothes: Light blue jeans, white boots, white 3/4 low-cut top wiv flarry sleeves, white/silver sash belt. Other: Has eyes pierced twice, top left ear pierced and belly button pieced House: Gryffindor/Slytherin *woteva house Kai is in* Paired With: Kai plz plz plz plz pretty plz! Personality: Normally bubbily and happy. Is a little vain and very flirty. Has a short tempre. she isn't the smartest but is gr8 for plans. Comes up wiv sum pure evil stuff for ppl she doesn't like. Hates being treated like she's lower thn sum1 Other: She is a half-blood Wand: 11 inch's, willow, unicorn hair Best sub: charms
| Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel (Not Logged In) On: February 20, 2005 15:35 CST
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Name:Angel Guidance Just Angel for Short Age:16 Description:I Have Silky Black Hair And Peircing Blue eye's Wear's Black tanktop and pants they flare out are like army pants that flare out black to has shoes like Rays (off beyblade) and has a leather jacket that is slightly big on her has on fighting gloves (not like a boxers) Hair usally In Braid Mid Back so it's outa the way usally prefers darkness but is extremly afraid to be in a small space in total darkness can see slightly better than most in dark i have 5 peircings 3 skulls 2 on left one on right bottem on each side is a dangling dager wears a silver cross necklace has a tatto of a broken heart wrapped in barbwire on sholder and burned imprent of angel wings on back paints her nails black travels a lot is really pale Is 5'1 weing 103 pound's Personality:Is goffy sometime's But is usally cold is ind to friend's but you don't want to be her enemy she has A problem with being touched not the I'll Kill you Kinda way the Scared and start's shaking way cause Has had VERY Bad past very tragic Can get hyper and Day's will eat a lot but other time's won't eat at All Can't stand idiot's yet Her best friend is Buble head (I know I know Irony* Is Sarcastic and Pessimistic close to Sadistic sometime's is realist and down to earth I'm good with Computer's and am VERY intelligant Mostly House:Griffandor Paired With:Kenny
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