| "Alone in the World" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more more more ( i am sooooooooooooooooooooooooo late at finding this story but i need mooooooooorrrrrrreeeeeeee)
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Reviewed By: redsnake15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 16:12 CST
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make a nother chapter already
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Reviewed By: Yin & Yang On: July 28, 2006 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good, plus the alcohol in Naruto is sake(saw-kay) pronounced as shown in parentheses
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Reviewed By: EmeraldFoxTears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 09:53 CDT
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OMG!!! You so have to update soon. I really liked what you've typed so far. The sad thing is, I can see Naruto getting to depressed like that. But I have a question, is Hinata going to appear anywhere in this fic, or is it going to be a Naruto Sakura fic. Please tell me it's not Naruto and Sasuke, Iruka or Kakashi, I don't mind yaoi, but I like fics where Naruto ends up with Hinata. Lol, well regardless, keep up the good work and update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 20:50 CDT
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I'm Setolover2. Yes, children r evil little things. Espically when u have 7 older bothers and 3 older sister's and they all have children of their own.
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: April 09, 2006 14:57 CDT
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Whoa........ What a freaky dream Naruto had. But it was a cool dream you writen. Keep writing. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: RENEGADE ASSASSIN On: April 07, 2006 17:50 CDT
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YOUR WRITING STYLE HAS IMPROVED AS THE STORY WENT ON. IT IS A GOOD STORY. I WAS LOOKING AT THE DATES FOR YOUR UPDATES AND THEY ARE FAR APART. I HOPE WE DON'T HAVE TO WAIT LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. WELL ANYWAY GOOD LUCK. PEACE
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Title: PLZZZZZZ
Reviewed By: anime _fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 18:36 CDT
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plz write plz write plz write plz write! i really like your story plzzzzzzzz!
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Reviewed By: felicity_angel467 On: March 15, 2006 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: kiki14(not logged in) On: January 21, 2006 09:41 CST
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YAY! I love your story. My favorite part was how Naruto was throwing plates everywhere. It seemed like something I could most definately see him doing. I really hope you'll update soon. See you!
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: January 20, 2006 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lov it. Update soon, and thats all i have to say.
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Reviewed By: Desert_Hermit On: August 25, 2005 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please continue^^ ...I really want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: BeeBeez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hee hee this is so good! btw, when naruto went down the right path, does that led TO or AWAY from his house? i was a bit confused at that part.
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