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| "Sakura-ness" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Tis a fanfic
Reviewed By: Fuschiaflames [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 01:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Tran Ngo, this is a fanfic. I use the same characers but I change them around and do whatever I want with them, that is usually what fanfics are. Anyways, thanks for reviewing my fanfic and sorry it got it made you so mad.....(O.O)
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Reviewed By: Tran Ngo On: March 03, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have seen your fan fic, and I got to say, I really angry with it. The Sakura in your story is nothing like in the movies. I like Sakura because not only she cute, but she also kind, sweet, and accept her own fault. But the Sakura in your stories is like some prep girl. Like at begining, when Kero wake her up and ask her to feed him and she said "What new" and then when she open the fridge to get pankage for Kero she said "Are you happy now?". I mean what the heck is that, she sound so arrogant. Don't you remember in the movies when Kero wake her up and when he want to eat? She never angry at Kero with something this small. Even when Shoaron say that she is a pathetic cardcaptor, yet she was not angry. She accept that she is not a perfect cardcaptor and Shaoron is better than her. Then, there's the part that she talk with Tomoyo about her tardy at school and then the part where she squeak when she see Shoaron. That sound so prep-like. Overall, you just can't bring out the likable of Sakura. You are very creative, bad creative but creative nonetheless since your Sakura is nothig like in the movies.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: February 20, 2005 04:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Both chapters are really good. Li and Sakura are so KAIWAII together. Please update soon.
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