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Reviewed By: AnimeSiren On: November 06, 2005 09:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was giggleing the whole time!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 19:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was unbelievable! I've read it three times already. It was so witty and enjoyable. The interaction between them was excellent. I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees the possibilities in sexy no jutsu! ^__^
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Reviewed By: VickiLe On: August 16, 2005 03:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dies laughing! God, just before I die, I should read this fic again. (At least then, I'll die blissfully happy) This is the most funny fic I have ever read. The plot is not farfectched, and it actually makes sense, which I find quite amazing. *Drools at the image of Sasuke as a girl* You are just amazing. Just totally mindblowing.
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Reviewed By: volpa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freaking awesome. I can't even properly verbalize how much I like this. I mean, the way Naruto and Sasuke interact is just superb - both incredibly hilarious and entertaining, but there is this kernel of believability there. This was such a fun read. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 21:31 PDT
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Fun story. I love how this is both a good story plot-wise and a great piece of smut. This fic made laugh in several places and feel sorry for Sasuke at the same time. Your ending was priceless for Tsunade's explanation -- great psych out moment there. Just well done -- I wouldn't mind seeing more fics in this universe.
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Reviewed By: ky0n On: June 26, 2005 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahaha, that was great ^_^ Although at first I was like "geh? Het?" It really was worth reading, you did a great job ^^;
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Reviewed By: danse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 21:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It should be mentioned that I don't even watch Naruto anymore and somehow I still ended up reading both this and the Teamwork stuff. And loved it. Your writing's just too addictive, and I do like the characters, just not the length of the anime. Lemons and creativity hardly ever go together anymore, so this stuff is a refreshing change of pace. I get so sick of Tab A-Slot B crap that calls itself good writing because they used every conceivable euphemism for the penis. I actually tend to scroll past lemons in longer pieces. :D But yes, I love this. And if you didn't say so, no one would ever be able to tell by your writing anymore that English is your second language; you write in it a lot better than a lot of anglophone fangirls. Keep it up
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Reviewed By: spikemyangel On: April 26, 2005 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this story on your site & loved it, OMG, it was so great, it made me laugh a lot. even though I prefer uke Naruto, they were both written so well that i don't care who's top or bottom! yay! the ending was hilarious....and really made me want to see Sasuke do everything he promised.....sequel?....for the love of god please! eh - anything you write will be great.
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Reviewed By: *trys to form a coherent sentence* On: April 13, 2005 17:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I... you... that .... awww fuck it *kisses you* you one of the best dome authors and you have a f***ed up sense of humor
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Reviewed By: aoshi4misao [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 11:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have given this more than 10 if i could have. I've never even considered them as girls, but it was great. Funny too, i kept laughing and making the people around me look at me like I was crazy. Good job. Keep it up. Great idea and it was well written too.
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Reviewed By: Vermillion Wolf On: March 08, 2005 18:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I demand a sequel! This was great! It was hilarious and sexy together in perfect harmony. But now I want one with the roles switched ::gives pouty face :: You can't give us that abd then not give us more. That's cruelty to animals.
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Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 09:00 PST
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As usual I LOVE YOUR STORIES!! but you already knew that... very entertaining and I liked it alot. Good job! And I hope to read more from the fic Team work and see the epilouge about what will happen with Sasu/Saku/Naruto's child...
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Reviewed By: dinkscythe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 04:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"homemade lesbian porn" *coughchokesplutterhowldie* the characterizations are dynamite! and i keep falling out of my chair laughing. my ass is getting kinda bruised...
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Title: *SMAKC*
Reviewed By: bhanesidhe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 11:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say what I think I like best is the way they both simply plough forward without any regard to consequences of their relationship. It's not really within their characteristics to harp on the details. Naruto burst forth with Demon-chakra shaped liked a fox and wails into Gaara saving Sasuke's ass, and yet he never brings himself to ask about it. Sasuke' seal flares up not once but twice to a paralytic effect yet Naruto decides if Sasuke's not going to bring it up that's good enough for him. It's just so completely within their nature not to think that screwing would change everything between them, because it really wouldn't, they'd just pretend it wasn't important and carry on, privately pleased with themselves for getting one over on their rival. Gotta say, part of me appreciates this is not an mpreg fic but then toward the end I couldn't resolve what would have been so bad if it was. SasuNaru as a Yuri-couple is daring, entertaining and tragically addictive. I had to reread the fic in its entirety just to be sure. I think it's I may have a happy concussion because of you. Random comments, like Shino not having eyes or Sasuke realizing he doesn't have underwear, [of course Naruto's inner-monologue] I couldn't help but slap my forehead in bemusement only I forgot to take off my rings. They're big rings, I have a bruise. Still, well worth it. It seems trite to reply 'this is just the best thing EVER!' and yet I can't help the impulse. It was highly enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 06:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't given all 10's in a review in ages, but this story was everything - well-written, sexy, and hilarious! I love it to pieces, but now it makes me wonder about what Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto actually get up to in your other story, "Teamwork"... Is this where I being the gratuitous begging for more of the same? ^_^
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