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"Addicted to You" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]
 Reviewed By: Sacred jewel [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2005 18:46 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I also want to say that since you've shared some of your work with me that I'll share some or my work with you (It is a poem I wrote that will be going in my book)The poem is based on a part where the girl is feeling really sad/lonely/depressed over a guy (the main guy character)and she writes a poem about how she feels(sheconsiders herself a poet,she loves to write),by the way the type of genre of the book is fantasy/fiction/romance(deffinately NO lemon)/ action and(sort of adventure), FROZEN TEARS As the sun sleeps the moon bring me sweet dreams of when he was still here,when he held me close. the stars dance in the midnight sky as the snow gently lays down a blanket of white, to enhance the beauty of the world. The wind gently brushes my cheek and whispers not to forget Not to forget when the frozen tears of the earth land upon my face and turn into tears of my own. The earth is crying for me and trying to help me through this pain this aching heart. The snow listens and reminds me, that if I meet my love and we part we will meet again like we did before. Hope you liked it.
 Title: O_O woah
Reviewed By: Sacred jewel  On: March 31, 2005 18:01 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You are an awsome writer!The story really did make me feel the need to grip-my-seat-so-tightly-the-cotton-comes-out-but-i'm-still-hanging-on-to-th e-fading-cloth!I think you have real potential.I can't wait to read more instead i think that you should continue the story you already have.I myself am a writer(sorta)but I'm not baseing it on inuyasha,instead I made up my own chacters and drawing them all too(for a page of the book where it will have a character profile)i was inspired by Inuyasha and after reading the book called Eragon.(sorry if I'm boring you,can't help it, my mom and the rest of my family calls me a total chatter-box!)But any way your doing an awsome job and I'm totally gonna draw a picture and send it to you for that drawing contest thinga-ma-bob!Also that reviewer titled uh-huh was a total jerk(sorta)probably wouldn't know a good story if it bit'em in the *** anyway awsome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry)  On: March 22, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
just like the title that was a really really short chappie! what took you so long? well anywho keep up the good work and update again soon please?
 Reviewed By: Uh-huh  On: March 21, 2005 14:57 CST
Comment/Review:
um...as sure as i am that you're trying ur best, im a bit at a loss of words...the first issue that i hit was the fact that pierre said "si" thats SPANISH for YES...a french boy will proably not say si...the next thing was the d'arvit...that is #1-NOT FRENCH and #2-from artemis foul..and elvish nonetheless...next time you try to use a language, do more research...find out some french curse words instead of making them up as you go along...i am sad to say i didnt even make it to the secong chapter...just work on the grammar, the flow of the story and deifnately on the languages you use and mebbe i can be enticed into comming back...maybe...
 Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2005 14:56 CST
Comment/Review:
dammit i wasn't my computer was lying to me dammit!!!! KAMI KUSO COMPUTER!!!!
 Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2005 14:55 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow but did you have to make his side effects so dam hard on him? well anywho i like story number #9 if your going to write it let me kno tell then keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE? YAY i'm the first reviewer! ^_____^
 Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Katana *not logged in*  On: February 23, 2005 14:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
(( Wow, this is so different than the other ones I've read. This is awesome! One question, how long did it take for Inuyasha to come up with the disguise 'Pierre' and get him signed up for school? But that doesn't matter. It's really good! And I don't think that I have ever really approved of the Sess/San relationship, but you have been able to do this without pulling him or her out of character, that's great! I give them my blessings in the wedding. Ne way, I think that my favorite for the list of choices would be #7, was it? Well, I like them all but favorite has got to be one where Inuyasha is a kidnapping fiend, and Kagome is an upper class murderer. Yes, I think that this would a good fanfiction... So he kidnaps her, and she continues to defend herself with her 'abilities'. He finds out who she really is and blackmails her? Gomen, I'm probably screwing your plot line up, don't listen to me. *duck tapes her mouth shut... realizes that she can't finish talking, goes to sign language, translator appears out of no where* Have... a good... day. Good bye... in.. Japanese... Oh, Sayoonara! *both wave good bye* ))

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