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 Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 23, 2006 07:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
tou should continue this story
 Title: cheese
Reviewed By: animegrrrl  On: February 26, 2005 11:05 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol, i enjoyed this. in my story puar ended up safely inside the house w/no broken key and yamucha had a happy birthday. it'll be interesting if you end doing a more complicated story.
 Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 05:52 CST
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this is a great idea, but the story will be more detailed in the actual Goku fic, right? I think instead of say; 'S1 you look under the mat' or 'S2 you look for a window' you should tell them which chapter to go to, eg; 'you look under the mat, go to chapter 2' or 'you look for a window, go to chapter 6' or something like that, it would be easier and would look better. Anyway, yeah, I think this is a good idea, I've read the goosebumps books like that they're quite fun. I hope you try it out!

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