| "Vegeta Wants Another Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 13:04 CDT
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I loved it, but it was s stupid ending, that could have been a little more romantic, and I would have liked to see Bulma's reaction to it... hehe... but i loved it. keep it up.
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Title: yayz
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 19:55 CDT
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lolz, i told you this is great! I love the humor in this and ::meow:: to my vegeta, haha. I love the hard core V/B in this one shot! And you kno i can't wait until you update again (on all ur stories)!
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Reviewed By: TT On: April 29, 2005 11:35 CDT
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"Do you really wish to be mine, and mine only? Because after this you can never leave me, or cheat on me." "Yes, you mother fucking lunatic, yes only you." HAHA, What a proposal!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 21:07 CDT
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I like how Vegeta actually thought about what he's done and not done so far, and how that may or may not have affected his relationship. Still, leave it up to the kid to get the ball rolling, huh? Loved the banter as Vegeta pointed out the finality of this last step. Of course, the last line was just the icing on the cake! Very enjoyable fic!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 16:58 CDT
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Killer last line. Primo B/V situation. These two are more interesting once past all that awkward get-together angst. I love this time period and stories like this one!
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 12:58 CDT
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Excellent line for the end! Just keeps the mind rolling. This was really a charming fic. I love Vegeta's confusion and his willingness to give something up to be with Bulma.
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Title: vegeta's dilemma
Reviewed By: fleursdelys On: April 08, 2005 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i definitely like the topic,(poor poor vegeta so clueless about woman bitchness ^_^) it's original and well writen which is an apreciable "plus"; well i said to you when chating that i would go and see your fics and well did just that (lol) i can only wish for, i don't know, another chapter if you plan on doing more than a one shot, or another story soon. (can't a girl dream?) well, maybe later on AIM or the group anyway take care of you "the french girl bowing down to your talent" ^_^
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Reviewed By: roseofvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 14:07 CST
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Poor Vegeta. I felt bad on how he was clueless to why he got kicked out of the bedroom. Vegeta wanting another child. ^_^ I believe I saw this was supposed to be a one-shot but it would be interesting to get Bulma's reaction to the more children issue.
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 05:10 CST
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Hey this fic is cute, I like it. Hey, my name's Jess too! NEway- Great story, I love B/V's!
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