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"A Major Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Una_Dougal [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2006 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ever considered labeling this "Shoujo" (same sex pairing)? Might help readers decide if it is their 'thing' or not - it's usually not mine, but this one is entertaining.
 Title: cute
Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan  On: September 07, 2005 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Um, well, My fave character is Batou, so viewing him as gay is certainly a new one, but you did it well... although I doubt that the Major would be pleased about Batou and Togusa being involved, but the tangerine dress thing was fucking awesome! I'm assuming that Togusa is divorced, but anyway, it's very sweetly done, and speaking as a straight woman, I would love for a guy to treat me like the way Batou treats Togusa, so caring and gentle. Very cool, dude, keep writing!!
 Reviewed By: Byrnstar  On: June 20, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heh. Nice little fic, it would be nice to see a longer one in this vein. Love the little domestic scene between the two, as well as their exchange over the dog and kids. The mental image of the Major in an orange dress had me cracking up.

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