Reviewed By: Punchis-Punchis On: December 05, 2001 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thiz is so no Goten I suer he sweet and he defenetly woulden't do that to his dady ,but hey, it Tainer Rachels ficction its very original but I think she shoulden't pick so much on Goku, I mean It's thigth because Chi-Chi is my favorite character and she gets to be victim and all but c'om on I beg U to stop picking on Goku(Chill girl i'm not on you just letting you know my opinion) By the way ,I loved the way u put Goten as a intelectual person that was tight. |
