| "Untitled ficlet" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
*giggles at the ending* Nicely written, very effectively in Duo's POV too ^-^ The story held my attention through till the end too, and I believe that I especialy liked how you kept making refferences to things in the past that the reader otherwise really didn't know about ^-^ it made it more fun and interesting ^-^
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Reviewed By: duosbabe On: February 26, 2005 09:46 CST
Comment/Review:
sooooo sweet!! love the fluff at the end. i was beginning to think that the reason that everyone was...attracted...to duo was because his zipper was down. that was funny! and heero acting the way he was...dreamy! i usually don't read ratings lower than 'r', but i'm glad that i did. you did a great job with your writing.
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