| "Unbalances" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: veon On: November 23, 2008 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is realy cool finish it. i like a lot.
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Title: there looks to be a prob
Reviewed By: soulsword [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 06:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, chapter 2 is the same as chapter 1...but chapter 1's pretty good :P
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Title: Unbalances
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: cool!!!
Reviewed By: inukag_tcboc On: March 01, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is cool. great idea. can't wait for u to update.!!!..lol.. i love AmonXRobin.. haha... ok.. continuing writing.!!
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