| "The First Time I Saw You On Namek" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: SS10009 (DANI) On: August 09, 2006 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, very wellwritten, completely original and definitely a read worth everyone's time
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Title: An original.
Reviewed By: bura400 (not signed in) On: May 19, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An original fanfiction idea, I have never seen a B/V deal with when they died. A unique peice of literary fanfiction if you ask me. I really enjoyed this, and it captures the emotion between Vegeta and Bulma very well while keeping them IC. Keep up the great work! Bura
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Reviewed By: DarkeAngelus666 On: March 10, 2005 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! A post-Majin fic of excellent caliber! There's not enough of those floating around. Baba provided some fantastic comic relief and the interaction between Basson and the Prince was stellar. A wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in apparently) On: March 07, 2005 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely incredible. I am always on the lookout for your stories, for you are an unbelievable author. You manage to keep all of the characters "in-character", which can be so hard to do sometimes. I admire the way you write, and I hope that you come out with another beautiful story soon. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Tempting/Tempest On: March 04, 2005 14:26 CST
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Wow! That was very original. I've never read anything like it. I love it when you do afterworld stories. Your description is so vivid and believable. You had everyone's personality down pat. I wish I had your skill for that. Great job!
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Reviewed By: CarlaS. On: March 02, 2005 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written fic, truly worthy of its prize. Thank you so much for continuing to share your talent with us. You took a theme that was challenging, to say the least, and turned it into a brilliant piece of fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! Just.. fantastic, Everything was perfect! I can't think of a single flaw! You are an incredibly skilled writer!
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 22:53 CST
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*sigh* You've done it again. Another fabulous Vegeta loves Bulma story. How do you manage to keep him so in character, keeping canon events echoing through him, yet still make him so changed. Bulma is the only one who really gets to see what he has become - she is the only one who he lets his guard down for. She is also the only one who could ever truly break him - and she knows it and is careful not to. I felt for him when he realized Goku reached level three - for Vegeta he doesn't feel it is worth fighting anymore for something he thinks he can't attain. Your Vegeta hurts so much, but no one gets to see it - he rarely admits it to himself, but Bulma gets to see through how much he needs her. You made me all teary again - *sniff*
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