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| "Innocent" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: ruemes On: March 07, 2008 02:14 CST
Comment/Review:
By now, looking at the date of the last chapter, I think you aren't going to update...but I wish you would. This story has an interesting concept, and is well developed. I'd like to read more, PLEASE! Ah, oops...I promised myself I wouldn't beg...
| Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I must say that you have me sitting on the edge of my seat. You must udate soon! The grammar is just great and I have no problems with the style of writing either. I also must say that this is very original, never seen a fic quite like this one. Once again, update as soon as you possibly can. Kouun.
| Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
It has a good start, I hope to see what is to happen soon.
| Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is excellent from what I have read so far. The second chapter has such a great cliff hanger ending that I'm almost biting my nails. Keep this story up it has so much potential. As for grammar and such, I have no idea, thats what a great beta reader is for, heh. Looking forward to the next chapter...I'm hooked on this... Shae-chan
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