|"Fall of a Broken Angel (Part I of the Angels Series)" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]|
| Reviewed By: InvincibleInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 20:28 CST|
Great chapter, luved it! As for the date of the marriage, it was I think at the end of November. I think the 30th because Rei's b-day is on the same day. So I guess you've kinda hit the mark already lol.
| Reviewed By: Priestess_of_Suzaku On: July 21, 2005 15:23 CDT|
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
I really enjoyed the entire fic! I just finished reading the mars series and it was so real! Keep up the great writing!
| Title: Sikandra|
Reviewed By: Ruri_Star [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:31 CST
Overall Rating: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
*points frantically at end of chapter* LORELAI LORELAI LORELAI! LORELAI SAID THAT!!! HAHAHA! I WIN!!! and michael hates her! teeheehee...i sound like rikku...
| Reviewed By: Sikandra On: March 13, 2005 13:55 CST|
YIPPEE! *singsong voice* bastard's in jail, bastard's in jail, bastards in JAAAAAAAAIL...which nobody can deny! *dances*
| Reviewed By: The Weirdo of the Lot (DemonAwaking ^_^) On: March 13, 2005 10:54 CST|
*evil grin* And so he goes up in smoke!!! MUWAHAHAHA! Erm... I mean... good job! ^_^" A well writen story, I'll be waiting for the update.Very believable, well done!