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Reviewed By: ezaangel(nli) On: March 14, 2006 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic caught my attention last year, and i fell in love with it,its wonderful and you have a great talent. keep up the great work and update soon
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Title: Excellent Update
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 22:29 CST
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First off, the funeral was wonderfully written. It made my eyes mist, because it took me back to my mother & grandmother's funerals. Well done. I have a funeral scene coming up in one of my fics & you really inspired me to get it right ^_^ I seethed when i read that jakotsu had the nerve to show his face in InuYasha's absence both at the wake & funeral. GRRR Then to openly threaten Kags..I hope she doesn't give his words any strength. She needs to be strong & ignore his dumb shit. Lastly, i LOVED Sess in this. Especially when he shut up the gossipers. This was just a really good update!
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Title: **Very Good**
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good chap. Deep even. I like Kag's way of seeing things & thanks for not making InuYasha an idiot like he is in other fics. On a personal note...I understand Kag's choice, BUT she shouldn't have denied him. That's VERY hurtful...especially now. At the same time Inu has to understand that she wants to be successful, but that doesn't make him any less needed or wanted. Ungh...she has to apologize for hanging up on him. That was the picture of immaturity (bad kags!) especially when he's a minute from tears all the time. Argh...so emotional! Well done ^_^
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 05:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey thought you droped off the side of earth. Havent really seen this updated much. Its lucky that I even saw it at all. Hope next chapters are just as good. and remember have Fun with it! hahar
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Title: That was deep!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 04:26 CDT
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Wow, that was really something. I can imagine how he felt being straight as an arrow with no curiosity. It really was a loss of innocence. This was well written & at least he got the info he needed.
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Title: Glad to see an update.
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 20:12 CDT
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Nice installment.
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Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is really really good I can't wait 4 u to update its awsome poor inu though but I must scream 4 joy kikyo's finally dead or soon to be which ever neways me so happy finally inu and kags togeather neways please update whenever u can take ur time if need be hope alls well and can't wait for the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 18, 2005 00:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 17, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, and I'm only chapter 5! Those sequences at the end with Kikyo remind me of the dream levels in Max Payne (computer game).
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX(Not logged in) On: June 28, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome I love it like always lol I bet your getting tired of hearing me say that..lol well I will come up with something more..original...in my next review! Ok well update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good...lol I wasn't expecting that to happen..ok well UpDaTe AsAp PlEaSe!!!!
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Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry I haven't admitted a review with the last chapter, but I've bin so busty that I really didn't had the time for it (I had to catch my train to work). But I loved it as much as this chapter! HOORAY KAGOME AND INUYASHA HAD- errr well you get my point. I think you put the lemon out very well, just nice enough to read and not too much useless details, very nicely done *writes with a red marker a big A on the chapter* It's to bad for Kikyo she is really brain dead and her spirit can't and rest (what does that girl has with dying and being a restless spirit whaha) but for the best since Kagome and Inu Yasha found each other. I also think you let Inu Yasha's past en Kagome's nicely flow into each others, with Inu Yasha playing Kagome savior. I'm so sorry I would write a longer review for you since I forgot to do it at the last chapter but I really gott2go! Please update soon (and you other fic's as well!) Big K!$$ and lots of luv to u girl! ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!!Cant wait to see what happens next like always..well Gotta go bye!!
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Reviewed By: Dave Man not signed in On: June 06, 2005 13:54 CDT
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Great plot line but I have a question. Will this end up being an Kag/Inu Fic or a Kik/Inu fic?
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Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (To Lazy To Login) On: June 05, 2005 14:07 CDT
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Hooray I got my Rin / Sesshoumaru part ^^ *sequels* Luv ya for it! Poor Kikyo and Inu Yasha, both want to reach each other so badly but can't. But then again: poor Inu Yasha and Kagome for they aren't aloud to get together and simply can't. Awh it's like this big soap serie and I'm totally loving it ^^ I have TV soaps but I love treading fanfiction haha I sure hope everything will come fine with Inu Yasha again 'cause I'm thinking he's going into a little dip or something. You made your story really unpredictable and that keeps people reading, since Inu Yasha loves Kikyo, but he has feelings for Kagome … Kikyo is in a coma and he might me never able to reach her again, and Kagome and him … well he's married for a start and she's the nurse. So he's a bit stuck I think. But I believe I'm babbling crap again (seriously I just keep talking and talking sometimes … like now *slaps herself* I gotta stop it!) Update soon please or I'll come looking for ya and force ya! Bubai, big K!$$ and lots of Love ~ Little Tennyo
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