|"Happy Birthday" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]|
| Reviewed By: sephys girl! On: March 30, 2005 20:33 CST|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
loved it! hehe!
| Reviewed By: MK On: March 27, 2005 23:57 CST|
I was a little puzzled when Tomonori answered "about an hour" after being asked what time it was. :P Spell check and a beta reader might be a good idea for you. But other than that: this was a charming and cute fanfic!