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"Happy Birthday" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: sephys girl!  On: March 30, 2005 20:33 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
loved it! hehe!
 Reviewed By: MK  On: March 27, 2005 23:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I was a little puzzled when Tomonori answered "about an hour" after being asked what time it was. :P Spell check and a beta reader might be a good idea for you. But other than that: this was a charming and cute fanfic!

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