Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Good job! I found waht I was looking for and it was very well done! I don't want to sound like a bossy know it all but K's wife's name is Judy not Julie. In case you ever need to write her name again that is the proper name. Little errors like that draw the readers attention away from the story and jarrs the immagination a bit. Really good job though for a one shot and you lemon's are really really good! I was very surprised!
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