Reviewed By: FanFicPotato [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... sentences are a bit choppy... um I would be a bit more detailed for one. Second... you need to finish it. Um... story I can tell comes from Full Metal Alchemist and a few other animes so it isn't completely original. But hey I can't say too much... ain't enough words to have a story.
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