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Title: the shnit
Reviewed By: southwest_cyba_ninja On: May 30, 2005 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it don't let these sh*t heads tell you different it was the sh*t and i hope you keep writeing and i also you add to this one two lots of love, Scn
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Reviewed By: dark_knight On: May 18, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the shnit keep it up hope for a sequal
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Title: wa too long
Reviewed By: malchior [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was pretty good but way too long, you shold think about doing your stories in shorter chapters not just one long section, overall it was avarage.
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