Reviewed By: Iximaus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 09:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I was wondering... do you know anything about people being in a coma for 2 years? They don't wake up suddenly and talk like nothing happened (exept for the amnesia). And most certainly the doctor won't tell them that they can GO home the next day. Their muscles won't work and they'd need lots and lots of physical therapy to learn how to use their muscles again plus a lot of other things. I like the idea behind the story and the first two chapters were great in my opinion. But you should really do some research before you write something as important as coming out of a coma after 2 years. It would make the story more realistic. Please don't let this story be one of those "typical" yaoi stories where love solves everything in the end. As I said the idea behind the story is really really good. I'm not a yaoi fan but if the story is good I don't mind reading them. Well, I'll wait for the next chapter and then decide if it's still worth reading. You're a good writer, and I hope you don't think that I'm flaming you. Ok, guess I wrote more than I thought I would. If you want to contact me please do so. I'd like to hear from you and maybe we can discuss a few things. P.S. Sorry for my bad english. I'm not a native speaker, but I'll try to do my best. ;-)
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