| "Going to America" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Hieis1RFG [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 18:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh slit she's blind?! And no that's no typo. I'm trying to watch my language... but it's not going anywhere so it's not very fun. Anyway... type faster or I'll have one of my reviewers send her mexican hobos to eat your computer! Oh and I'll consider using my Eternal Flames on you too!
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Reviewed By: boooooya On: June 08, 2005 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
kool story i really like it!! and i think u desurve more reviews so i reviewed
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The dialog was nice, but you might want to work on your format and include a little more description. If you have nothing but talking, it isn't going to be very exciting. I hope to see lots of twists and turns. Nothing more refreshing than a brand new fanfic. :D
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