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| "Autumn Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: So much in so small a space
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: March 15, 2005 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. Ho..oh lord. I can't breathe, this rare gem was so sudden a discovery. I was digging through piles of easily forgotten words, searching for something with merit, but I never, NEVER imagined to find something so precious so quickly. You possess a true talent. Your meticulous crafting of the scenery in tandem with the subject's emotion shows a well-developed refinement of style and substance. I loved how the piece was built into a wholy composed story through short, free-flowing vignettes. It kept the emotion real and raw, and also emphasized its dominance in the story's theme. There was no need to delve into thick plot or define specific circumstances. We understand - or can imagine (even better) - what the outcome was simply by Sango's reaction. I was truly blown away by this piece; exceptional work.
| Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, it was really descriptive. i loved your metaphors. this could also, sort of, be a poem.
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