| "Moving to California" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*panting8 wahahahaha i got hime of my tale again! and this time for good (behind sakota there is kai straped to a char and a cloth over his mouth so he could not yell at sakota) well he is out of the way... anyways I still like the story! I hop you update soon! Ja....*Kai excapes from bindings* aaaaaaaaaa G2G Ja ne! *runs away from the vary mad blue haired boy*
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Reviewed By: kia twee On: April 19, 2005 14:29 CDT
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gr8! but problem is......i've already read it in ff.net so plez update soon!
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Reviewed By: keeper232 On: April 16, 2005 18:22 CDT
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lol kai having a pillow fight XD! but poor tala :((( his dad is so mean >:( oh yea, great story i love it!!:D
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha I finly lost Kai took some pesaverinse but i t was worth it....anyways i like the story, good, sad (por Tala)I still love it! *sees Kai* OH MY GOD how did he find me! got to go, Ja ne! *runs away hopping Kai diden't see her*
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Title: hey hey Kani-Chan!
Reviewed By: MyStIC bLaCk PhOeNiX On: April 11, 2005 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Kani! fantastic!! well it always has been and always will be, i can't remeber did you finish California? oh well! maybe i should get an account on here.... anyways talk soon! Emi-chan x
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pants* Kai is a fast runner....I still like the story! keep up the good work! update soon please ok? *sees kai coming* oh god! well I got to run..until next time Ja ne(c-ya in Jap.) *runs awary as fast as I can* kai don't you have a beyblade practice or something to go to insted of chasing me!aaaaaaaa
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Reviewed By: =) On: March 30, 2005 17:56 CST
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Good job on the new chappies!!!
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Title: ........
Reviewed By: Jixnce [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......How often do you update?? ....... Do you update every week or more then that? When you use to write on fanfiction you updated every week... That is until they took your stories down... Well Great Chapters!! Please Update Soon!!
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Title: kaNi its kAt =D
Reviewed By: flick_flea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can i give you anything less then 10?! well as you can probably guess i have figured out this site =D!! but i have read all of these chapters!! can you send them to me?! the last one that i read was preparing for christmas which is chapter 41!!! im so excited i want to read more!!! although i might have to go back to the beginning and read through it again, coz i think that i may have forgotten so things =P if you want as i re-read it (if i do re-read it that is =]) i'll check the grammer for you in the chapters that you havent posted!! huggles kat xoxo
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sakota:hay Sakota here again like the story still, please update soon *looks around* kai is still trying to kill me for all the revews I made to peaple who make him fall in love(like you) *sees kai with his loncher ready* well I better be going c-ya*runs away yalling kai is going to kill me!*Kai:"come back here Sakota! *holds up a dager*
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Reviewed By: GR On: March 27, 2005 22:23 CST
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Hmmm... can't wait to see more of destiny/kai =) and great story so far too
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Title: CoOoOooL!! -lol-
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 19:08 CST
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Argh! how un-cool...i still don't know how to make proper use of the site -lmao- damn i have a mixture of songs stuck on my head...and i sing a part of a song and suddenly a part of a completely different song follows and so on...at the end i have a mixture, which btw gave an idea for our fic...remind me to tell ya -chuckles- blow the house!!! a.k.a. enchant the readers of MediaMiner with your fic!! yay! i know you will!!
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Title: Yo!!
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf, AG, Shaman Queen...etc etc etc On: March 25, 2005 19:02 CST
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Man i'm tired...i spent the whole day studying calculus and finally i finished!! YES!! -coughs- yaaaaaay update!! aaah! i love your ficcy my friend!! on to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
liked the story! as I always say keep up the good work!^_^(behind Sakota there it kai with a knife) ok ok i hate the story! just put down the knife kai please!(kai leaves mummdling something about one day he should kell Sakota for telling writers to keep writing storys about him)I like it realy I do and i better go befor kai come back so c-ya!^_^
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Title: hi!
Reviewed By: MyOwnWorld [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 17:37 CST
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hehe it starts...lol ~Sharon
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