| "Moving to California" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Title: I love it!!!
Reviewed By: Sakura_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated it this way because i love it soo much the thing i love best is how long u made the chapters and ow long the stories are it's just sooo great
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Reviewed By: monkeyray9 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 17:52 CST
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i absolutely love your fic! keep it up, and update soon please!
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Reviewed By: _Dream_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Pwease.........update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update. THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: I cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewed By: xoxoHARMONYxoxo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I positively love it,I just cant get enough of it and I always find myself eager to read the next chapter. Please write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: sofiya05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey, so i first read dis in august n den i chekd bk 4 updates and saw 11 chs waitin 4 me...n d last tym u updated was on ma 16th bday...yday so yay! 4 me! im so glad u've updated. i am luvin d story poor nate i reli hope she survives n as 4 kai i tink he n destiny need 2 talk.
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Title: moving to californai
Reviewed By: L3V@N@ On: October 03, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo...about time u updated...man the storie is so funny i hope you update more chapterz soon... >.<
its been along time...and i was excited it was updated..coz i came on and i clicked on moving to californa and i checked how many chapter z there were and it said 40 and i went crazy coz it stopped up to chapter 37 and ive been wating 4 u 2 update it till now...>.<
and after dat i grabbed the phone and called my friend and said "hey tay they updated moving to californa"and we both went crazy,but she wasnt allowed on the computer so i read it to her on the phone. we loved and we cant wait for the nextz chapterz...i think i like the truth or dear game that was so funny*hahahahahahahahahaha*coz kai and destany hate each other so much and everyone new that and deared the to like kiss and shit(so funny hahahaha)but its good to see that kai and destany are kinda getting along and i hate ayden ide rather destany go out with kai...but ur story is so go and i hope u update soon...pplz >.<
well laterz :lev@n@ p.s:pllz update A.S.A.P >.
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Title: moving to californa
Reviewed By: l3v@n@ On: October 01, 2005 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pllz tell me ur going to update the storie its really interesting and its my favourite... laterz love:l3vAnA
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Reviewed By: Silver89Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An update!! YAY!! ^__________^ Kai and Destiny are soââ'¬Â¦ so SWEET!!! But oh so evil at the same timeââ'¬Â¦ Har har harââ'¬Â¦ Update! Update! Update! Update! ^o^ *gets whacked over the head* X_____X ââ'¬Â¦OW!!! >o< Anywaysââ'¬Â¦ You get my point. Heheââ'¬Â¦ *rubs head where she has been hit*
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 13:05 CDT
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^-^ I still love your story till this day ^-^ please keep going ^-^ I G2G sadly so Ja ne!
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: SpiritualEnergy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAY you UPDATED LOL great job,please please please UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ looove it still and can't what for you to update! and untill then I'll be here chasing my tail feathers XD *runs around*
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Title: You Rock +Your Story
Reviewed By: devils_cup On: July 13, 2005 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is so cool. I've never been so hooked onto such a story in my entire life!!! It dives me nuts , the things that happen. You are the best writer I have ever heard of(notice i didn't say seen because I've never seen you in my entire life!) YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: MOVING TO CALIFORNA
Reviewed By: L3V@N@ On: July 04, 2005 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAN I LOVE "MOVING TO CALIFORNA" IT ONE OF MY FAV STRIES DAT U WROTE!!!AND IT EVEN MADE ME CRY IT WAS A VERY KOOLZ STORY AND I LOVE IT!!!!! AND I HOPE U PUT MORE CHAPTERZ UP DERE SOON I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT..... AND I JUST NEED 2 MORE STORIES OF URS 2 READ WHICH IZ "MORNING FLUFF" & "BELOVED RAI". I HOPE U GOT SOME MORE STORIES TO PUT UP...COZ I LUV UR STORIES SO DOES MY BESTFWEND T@YL0R... AND YEH..WE CANT GET ENOUGH AND WE,WELL I WANT MORE OF UR STORIES TO READ... REMEMBER I CANT WAIT 4 DA NEXT CHAPTER TO COME 4 "MOVING TO CALIFORNA"...ANYWAYS LATERZ:L3V@N@..........
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Title: ^.^;;
Reviewed By: Jixnce (i don't wanna log in) On: July 03, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....lol i think i remember the next chapter!..... hehehe..... Pretty Please Update Soon!!!!
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Title: will u send me an angel
Reviewed By: L3V@n@ On: June 29, 2005 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!!DIZ IZ L3V@N@ AGIN JUST TO SAY I LOVE DIS STORY IT MAKES ME CRY AND IT IS ALSO ONE OF MY FAVZ..... LUZ YA HEPPZ LATERZ:L3V@N@
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