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| "Kai`s child" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Vancha On: April 28, 2005 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've captured the characters very well, tyson and nearly all of Rei in particular. A bit too much with the girlfriend stuff, Kai had to have one of course, but Max didn't, and Mariah's control over Rei was out of character, considering after presenting his reasons, she usually agrees. The story was an interesting one for sure, I enjoyed it, as I've said it was hard to see it as not another few episodes due to the characters being so well copied in attitude and personality, apart from what I've already mentioned, Kaisa is a good character, although I couldn't imagine Kai ever being...."with", someone too happy and bouncy, and Kaisa doesn't seem to picked up any of her father's personality, apart from the bunny and thumb sucking (which, I'll be honest, I didn't like). As for Kaisas blade, I would say good work on the bitbeast, it fits the child, yet sounds as magnificent as Kai's Dranzer, although to have it "more powerful than Dragoon or Driger" was a little over the top, it would have been perfect if it was purely the bane of dranzer, until Kai warmed up to Kaisa, of which the two blades would be neutral to each other, reflecting the personalities of both bladers. Overall, nice story, I enjoyed it, and once again, (apart from what I've picked out), the characters were spot on, well done.
| Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya me again I like it how your making Kai become nice to kaisa! i still love the story! update soon! Ja ne!
| Title: When?
Reviewed By: Shitza On: April 24, 2005 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to update this? When??? Shitza
| Title: CONTINUE!
Reviewed By: Shitza On: April 17, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, come on update this, please!!!!!!! Shitza
| Title: YEY
Reviewed By: Kimik0123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAWWWW... I love thefact that Kai has a kid!! I'm so happy he's not gay in this story! *SMILES* I can't wait 4 your update... i've enjoyed this most of all!!! Keep up the good work and ill keep reviewing! *DANCES AROUND* ... see ya!
| Reviewed By: Hikari Mitsune On: April 01, 2005 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! Well I have read your fanfic and I see that I really like it Kaisa it's so cute ^-^. I wish Kai would stop being so proud and take much care of her. But I understand him it isn't too easy to change so quickly, even it's a kid so adorable like Kaisa. I want to read more! It's so interesting, I wanna now wath will happens. It's a very original story, and it's very funny so because of that my grades to your grate fic ^^. Another thing you may notice but my natal language is Spanish and not English, so if there is any spelling or mostly grammar misteake (yea I sucks at grammar u.ú)I beg you to forgive me n.n, because the only English I know is the one they teach me in school (these is one of the times I thanks to know Englsih). Without any more thinks to tell, unless. Continue the most quickly you can!! Please!! I have to know! See you soon! -*Hikari Mitsune*-
| Title: .....
Reviewed By: Jixnce [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK......I'm going to start reading and reviewing all your stories again.... ^.^ Great Chapter!! Please Update Soon!! .... even though this was already finished on ff.net.....
| Title: Me once again
Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay you are realy good at makeing thes storys , so keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its me again thanx for updating.....but once again I need to ask please keep going!
| Title: Just really, really nice
Reviewed By: Yume Hokoro On: March 17, 2005 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is really nice. The idea is brilliant and you are a talented writer. Some bad spelling mistakes here and there, but it isn't that bad. At least I don't care. And it's all sooo sweet. I'll look foreward to read nect chap. So please write fast (then I'll be glad.) Pweeeease? Oh, by the way it would be really nice if Kai soon showed Kaisa that he cared about her or something like that. I loved the part where he carried her back. And the story about Kais blue bunny was hilarous. I really laughed at that one. Well, lang talk, short point: Really great!
| Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww she is so cute, please keep going, please, pritty please!
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