| "Kai`s child" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Indypigen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's a very cute FanFic :-D
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Reviewed By: Indypigen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 15:59 CST
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Reviewed By: Indypigen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 15:59 CST
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Reviewed By: MyStIC bLaCk PhOeNiX On: August 18, 2005 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great Kani, i'm not that lovely *blushes* it's really irritating that they removed all these off ff.net isn't it! XD ttyl! xxxxxxx
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Reviewed By: protofan On: July 13, 2005 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really great you should become a writter your really good. I'm starting a story too. I'm a huge fan of Kai and beyblade. Keep writting!!!
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Title: kai's child
Reviewed By: L3V@N@ On: July 04, 2005 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love tha story!!!it was so emotional(sorri about any spelling mistakes)and i had alot of fun reading and i only like reading ur storyz...there tha best!!!oh...and i cant wait 4 tha second story to continue it.u tha BOMB!!!! laterz luv ya:L3V@N@... PS:im off to read another one of ur storys(u should b famoues)(me and my friends love ur stories and ur our fav fanficton writer)... laterz!!!!!!!! i almost 4got u have a very creative mind and talented(with stories and if ur good at other stuff...........^-^,^-^... laterz...!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: chibi Setsuna-chan On: June 19, 2005 12:31 CDT
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That was so cute. I loooooooooooooove it. Love Kai's present. I'm glad you concluded your story that way. Kai's girlfriend has a weird name though, I never heard of such name. Your story is original and realistic. I hope your next story is as exciting as this one. Good luck and I hope to read it soon, Yours truly, Setsuna-chan P.S. Sorry for the new name, a mediaminer.org member took my nick.
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww thats so cute ^_^ was a great eanding. now I wondering about Kai's wife now where did you get that name?
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Title: AWW
Reviewed By: Kimik0123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to miss Kaisa!... *SOB*... C ya
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaaaa I whant to see kai's present for her! please herry up and update! ^_^ pwease
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Reviewed By: Setsuna-chan On: May 16, 2005 14:46 CDT
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That is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!! Kai acting as a dad, too cool, he is so adorable (I looooooove it).He is so .... everything good we could say about him. Update soon Setsuna-chan
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Reviewed By: Manga JAZZi On: May 11, 2005 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... This was OK; I've only read the first chapter, but if you've read the last BeyBlade manga, you see that Kai has a child called Gou. But, this has a good plot, it's only the spelling, not just Kaisa's letter mix-ups, that makes it a bit of a letdown. Still, a good idea for a FanFic, so well done for that!
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Reviewed By: Setsuna-chan On: May 10, 2005 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your chappies one after the other asking myself what in the world is going to happen next. It's the first fanfic that I read about Kai having a child and I think you did great in your description of what someone would feel in Kai's situation. You even kept the characters attitude like in the show. Keep the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Three cheers for the great and talitened Kanilla!(don't know how to spell it)
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Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: Vancha On: April 28, 2005 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've captured the characters very well, tyson and nearly all of Rei in particular. A bit too much with the girlfriend stuff, Kai had to have one of course, but Max didn't, and Mariah's control over Rei was out of character, considering after presenting his reasons, she usually agrees. The story was an interesting one for sure, I enjoyed it, as I've said it was hard to see it as not another few episodes due to the characters being so well copied in attitude and personality, apart from what I've already mentioned, Kaisa is a good character, although I couldn't imagine Kai ever being...."with", someone too happy and bouncy, and Kaisa doesn't seem to picked up any of her father's personality, apart from the bunny and thumb sucking (which, I'll be honest, I didn't like). As for Kaisas blade, I would say good work on the bitbeast, it fits the child, yet sounds as magnificent as Kai's Dranzer, although to have it "more powerful than Dragoon or Driger" was a little over the top, it would have been perfect if it was purely the bane of dranzer, until Kai warmed up to Kaisa, of which the two blades would be neutral to each other, reflecting the personalities of both bladers. Overall, nice story, I enjoyed it, and once again, (apart from what I've picked out), the characters were spot on, well done.
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