| "Where Are You Now" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: my review
Reviewed By: Lady Frei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue, I love it
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Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 14:36 CST
Comment/Review:
WOOT! First to review. This has a suitable plot so far, but you need to work more on keeping to one tense. Was, is...Past is preferable; it just sounds better. Maybe try to word you sentances better and use more adjectives. But I think you've got real potential! _Milady17_
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