| "Missing Her" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 06:26 CDT
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I really liked this story. It was very twisted and had lots of little plothoops for the G-boys to jump through. Wonderful. ^_^ And I loved how you put music or poetry throughout your chapters. It was a definate little pick-me-up for the chapters. Wonderful work. Keep it up! And...What about poor Quatre? ^_~
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Reviewed By: LiZzArD [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 19:53 CDT
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I really like this fic. I find it funny, touching, and just plain awsome. I very much so look foward to your next chapter.
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Title: YES!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nekuyasha :) On: May 03, 2005 08:41 CDT
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YEA!!! O.k., the edible underwear comment was hilarious! And if Wufei had choked much more he probably would've drowned in his coffee! I just love it! And what's up with Heero? Poor guy. *pats Hee-chan on back and hands him a tissue* Thw wedding is REALLY getting to him, isn't it? Maybe eloping would've been better. Not that Zechs would let that go over well... Well, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 16:08 CDT
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UPdate!!!!!!!!! damn addiction.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 07:21 CDT
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That was a great chapter! O.K., so Wuffers has finally made up his mind, huh? Well he better not screw it up this time or she's probably gonna step on him with his own Gundam! :) I loved the way you made chapter 8 a songfic! I love them! Anyway, Keep it up! I can't wait for the next update!
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 04:36 CDT
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I really liked that chapter. I think it's cute how Trowa has made himself Wufei's personal psychiatrist. And the whole thing with Wufei running scared...It's just cute! I can't imagine him running from anything, but Sally just might the one thing that could do it. She just needs to grab HIM by the shoulders and kiss him. Better yet, grab him and drag him off somewhere private...maybe he'd finally get the message! :) Anyway, Very well done and I look forward to your next chapter! A few minor spelling errors: At the beginning of this chapter you have 'Wife' instead of 'Wufei' being woke up. And in the beginning of chapter 6, Trowa asks 'What was her?' Was that supposed to have 'name' after it or ... ? Either would work. Well, till next chapter, NekuYasha :)
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so beautifully written! You had me bawling at the end! Not just misty eyes, but streams running down my cheeks. THAT'S how great this chapter is and I congratulate you on a superb chapter!
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Title: More great Chappies!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 08:56 CDT
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Sory I haven't reviewed each of the last couple chapters, been busy and just now got to read the last 2 chapters. I love it! I can see where Relena might have cold feet and don't blame her. I especially liked Wufei's advice to her-wonderful! I am a HUGE lover of dream sequences and where you can take the plot with them. You're doing great with that! I can't wait for more!!! :)
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 05:47 CST
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I really like this story! It's just awesome! :) I love how you're digging through Wufei's psyche and dredging up all things Nataku. Now if only he could seperate the past from the present...maybe some help from one Miss Po? Keep it up! Can't wait for more!
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Title: Keep it comin'!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 04:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and hope that you post more on it soon! I don't particularly like Wufei but certain fanfics make me at least put up with him if not really like him. This is one such. One thing most people don't see a lot of is Wufei stories dealing with romance. Most are rather hard-core stuff that have him in yaoi pairings with the likes of Zechs or Treize. Every now and agagin you find him with Sally, but again, not often. Even I tend to skirt around the issue of who to make him date in my stories. I'm actually glad to see someone looking into his psyche and making him deal with his feelings for his lost wife. And I agree, all married couples deserve that happiness and connection. And what's the point of Fanfics if we can't change a few things here and there? It's what the concept is built on! Anyway, I eagerly await the next chapter. Please make it soon!
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