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| "Megaman Zero: Cursed Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Luminous Blane the Red Dart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo, my good fellow. I can't wait to see more of this fic. And I couldn't care less that you made Steel Massimo into a girl. Hell, it's become a title that's meant to be passed on, like the Dread Pirate Roberts. If you don't know WHAT I'm talking about, go rent the princess bride. I really like how things are going in this fic and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Dragon and Sword Master [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 09:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice first chapter that you have here, as well as Zero showing concern for Ceil's health and I thought it was funny how he told Ceil's assistant that she was asleep in a voice that suggested that if you wake her you die. Anyways, I hope that you can have your friend help you with the second chapter, and I wouldn't mind helping you as well, if you want my help that is.
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