| "The Untold Terror Of The Betas Three" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Name not entered for fear of basements On: March 19, 2005 17:38 CST
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"We dare not speak her name aloud" I once thought they were so lucky, to read the Great Sueric's works first...
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: March 19, 2005 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah! that was so funny. it was so good! i absolutely loved it! It feels nice to have this kind of hilarity again, i need to read more humorous peices- it really brightened my day. ^_^ thank you!
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Reviewed By: Caphriel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 16:40 CST
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HAHAHAHA!! That's great. I always wondered how you got your betas to beta so fast that you could post a chapter a day. The least you could do is provide them some luxery items. Remember, a happy worker is a productive worker. I can just envision you leaving out beta-traps consisting of a box propped up by a twig with a pocky stick under it. "Here, beta beta beta... Here beta. Nice beta. That's right, get the pocky. Gooood beta!" I'm sure you'll be hearing from the Society for Prevention of Cruelty to Betas soon, though. This story made my day :) ~Caphriel
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Title: Only me!
Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! Oh that was awesome. Yes I've been lured into many things by the mention of Pocky. You just discovered FMA eh? Does this mean we might be seeing some FMA fanfics one day? *Rubs hands gleefully. Wipes away a tear* Oh dear I did so enjoy that.
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Title: O.o...mad skillz, mad skillz, mad skillz...o.O
Reviewed By: Ish P4WN3|)... On: March 19, 2005 14:50 CST
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.... .... ........Oh Sue. ROTFLMAO!! I don't know that there are words to do this justice. Danielle called me to check on the meaning of SASS for you... I think it was originally Sexxhoumaru--but do you know how hard that is to say over the phone without laughing? I have to book mark this for my bad days LOL. I cannot wait to see if you do decide to continue this and introduce the other two to their cages. I loved it, it's absolutely hilarious. None of us ever realized what we were getting into with you when we sent you presents, lol.
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Reviewed By: LadyB On: March 19, 2005 14:44 CST
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I must commiserate with Suze...this piece is too hilarious to form a coherent thought for writing a review. ::Note to self, must airlift crates of Pocky (and other sugared products for Sarah)to evil author to sustain the poor betas!::
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Title: OMFG!!!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 19, 2005 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ROFLMAO & Off & off & off... *blue in face from lack of oxygen and passed out in crater made from impact*
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Title: CUTE!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not signed in On: March 19, 2005 14:32 CST
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That was adorible! So cute!
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Title: *snicker*
Reviewed By: LadyBlade (NSI) On: March 19, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! That was sooooo eeriely similar to the way my sisters react when I ask them to beta my stuff! LOL Not sure which parts were honest truth or your wonderful imagination, but can I volunteer to be a beta? LOL kidding, I'm sure you've got plenty. And i don't think I have anything you'd want... maybe an anime drawing? heheh ok I'm off now, must sleep.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye (i thought i was signed in) On: March 19, 2005 13:48 CST
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I thought you must of had them squirreled away somewhere at your beck-n-beta-call!
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Title: im the loniliest beta in cell #2
Reviewed By: basement-inhabitant007 On: March 19, 2005 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i miss being next to my fellow member of SASS ... i will not cry damn it! lol ... seriously this was so hilarious and made my day so much better after last night lol .... i couldn't stop laughing .... hehehe at least we have our cells next to each other ... poor kim her safety circle can't help her now .... and i don't even want to know what type of cell Diana is going to have to have bc she would help us try to escape lol or gnaw through the bars herself lol ... she's so feisty .... hehehehe this is truly great lol hopefully it won't make greta cry lol hehehe
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Reviewed By: Rini (not signed in) On: March 19, 2005 13:13 CST
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You've cracked, you have finally cracked.. XD lmao
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Title: Evaaaaal!
Reviewed By: your first victim-15 On: March 19, 2005 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nothing like writing yourself as the most evil author on the planet...LOLOL Though seeing myself as a main character was quite...strange. LMAO. What a nice stress relief that must have been for you! I LOVED it! Seriously couldn't stop laughing the whole way through. Granted...alot of them are inside jokes but hilarious just the same! Thank you for taking the time to do this. I am sure it will come as something we will reread just to get a laugh. I loved the part when you separated 'SASS' cause you thought they were plotting against you. The ending was hilarious! You are truely the master!
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Reviewed By: Suze (and I need to sign in why?) On: March 19, 2005 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't....breathe....laughing....too....hard..... Poor, poor hentai betas. They just didn't know what they were getting themselves into, did they? LOL!!!!
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Reviewed By: KaloBagh@mediaminer.org On: March 19, 2005 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious. You're an awsome writer. Can't wait till your next story. Love and Peace Ani
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