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"The Untold Terror Of The Betas Three" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ]
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 Title: there are stories in the span of mortal life that touch all deeply and profoundly...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2007 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
...then, there's THIS one. OHMYGAWD, Sue! It's lie reading yout Totosai X 1000 ( and I laughed myself Fuschia off THAT one)! **cyber glomps and care packages to all you faithful (and frantic...LOL!) betas. I have learned from this tale of yours how to properly care for my beta and show my utmost appreciation! SUGAR-LADEN SNACKS! Thankies, Sue! ROFL!
 Title: oh kami-sama
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2007 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sue, you have truely lost your marblez. Locking your poor betas in the cellar/basement? Working them to the bone? Poor, poor, poor betas. *Makes mental note to send betas some real food.* I would shudder in fear, if you ever got a whip.
 Title: >.
Reviewed By: InuYasha_Hentai_Freak [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 15, 2006 17:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG LMAO!!!!! I LOVE YOU WORK!!!! That is so awesome, I laughed so hard. ...Do you really keep your betas locked in a cellar? .> ::waves her hands infront of her face.:: I won't tell! I swear!! Lmao!! J/k anyway that was so funny, I love your Fanfics, I love your writing period! Keep writing, I love to read!!!!! Maybe I should steal you and lock you in my cellar, and make you write for me! ::ponders that thought:: Keep writing!!! ::bows to your betas:: I will pray for their souls. XD ::hug::~Sagokiyo
 Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 28, 2006 15:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
.......*pulls out little button and pushes it revealing .50 cal chain guns and 200mm cannons aiming at Suric* Stay away from me...... *grabs sword and gun* I mean it.... STAY AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: inuyashachic612  On: September 25, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey! wow these chapter were hiarious! i love them thou! they are so good! cant wait to read more, til next time! ^_^
 Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 30, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your betas must love you (and fear you). This is halarious!
 Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 07, 2005 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my... That was absolutely hysterical. It's wonderful that you and your betas are close enough that you would write a story for (and about) them. It's also great how you can so easily describe yourself as evil and maniacal. This is definitely one of my new favorites. My regards to the betas.
 Title: .........................
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 22, 2005 12:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow...that was...disturbing. I think that would be the nicest way of saying that, lol...Jeez, for such an "interesting" story, this one had me laughing almost all throughout it! Hmm...no more room for betas, huh? Well...after reading that, can't say if thats a good or bad thing. Anyways, hilarious little short! Kudos to your betas, may they forever work in your basement, lol! (they do an awesome job!)
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 18, 2005 00:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMAO!!! Those were funny. Your poor betas...I give them my condolences.
 Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 25, 2005 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
OH BALLZ!!!! LOL every once in a while I ahve to go back and reread this and LMAO it;s so funny... The best part is I got to say ballz. Joo crack me up I ish glad joo are meh friend!
 Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2005 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
A shirtless Cain, sounds nice! lol! wow..u've gone insane havent you..in a good way ofcourse! (wait is there a good way to be insane..?
 Reviewed By: ll kocoum ll [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2005 18:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
LoL, that was effing funny. I'm kinda jealous now. I'd want to be locked up in a cellar with a computer and a sketch pad. :]
 Reviewed By: Kesstral (notsignedin)  On: May 14, 2005 21:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm shirtless cain eh? I like this glimpse into the future... and of course, an obligatory LMAO(!!!!)
 Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2005 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Highly amusing! I almost feel sorry for your Betas. Almost. After all they did ask for it ^_^ But It had me giggling, especially at the Mommy of Yore bit. Yay for amusement and incoherent babbling.
 Title: i have found the hell yet it could be a heaven
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2005 15:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
*i'm wide eyed as i watch the caged ones work...i have snuck into their hell, where SHE holds them*(i am a small furry dragon...or perhaps a cat with wings, it's unknown as of yet)*i slip around the cages to the urns and i sniff at them gently*(no one knows i'm here, i am too silent and small, and right now my fur is dark like shadows)*i wonder in my silence if perhaps i am not already caught like these, or if i want to be..i move back to the cages*(i was once feral but you have tamed me with your stories)*i need to see the picture that i heard the commotion about, but i can't see it*(i'm too small, and if i try to jump to see it, i would be found)*so i wait, till it's come out for all to see...and i sit in silence watching the betas, and the artist as they work and talk among themselves and i may even wish to be part of it somehow*(as a pet to HER or a pet for the caged ones to play with when they're tired, i wouldn't know)*i think about the choices and wonder what i truly want, and i wonder if she'll ever catch me as i watch the betas, and the artist in silence forevermore*
 Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_ange(nsi)l  On: May 14, 2005 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol. i liked the ending.. interesting addition with the urns, there.
 Reviewed By: TehBaka~  On: May 14, 2005 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMAO!! Hehe, I got my cameo one-liner in this one! XD *snortgiggle* And it's really amusing to read this now, even though I got unurned last night. *flies away like a free bird*... Err, it's too early for this, but thanks for giving me something to lift my mood upon awakening. XD Very hilarious, very accurate, very awesome! *roflmao* Thanks for sharing this with us!
 Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2005 14:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMAO!!! I can't help it, these are so funny!!!! Poor Duckie. She is and amazing author though!! Can't wait to see her new pictures. You have another reviewer named Kaitlin!?!?! There are so few of us!!! May I ask what her pen name is? Just because I'm curious, I don't plan to send her emails or anything. Send your beta's my sympathy! They put up with so much and rarely get any credit or praise (reviewers fault not yours)or if they do I haven't noticed. Sorry, I try and read over the stuff at the bottom, but some times I'm just in too much a hurry (my boss doesn't like me goofing off on my computer at work. ;.;) Hilarious chapter!!! ~Caitlin p.s sorry that I sent this too Purity 4 also. I really don't know how that happened.
 Reviewed By: DawnFire881  On: May 14, 2005 13:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
BAHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA....lmao oh Sue, you rock! Poor Mel and Duckie really had no idea what they were getting themselves into! And the rest of us....yes Nela does love to thwap us...and I think she loves it just a little too much! lol. Though I have to say, I love how you put the urned ones in it too...very very amusing! Ah such is the life stuck in teh Sueric's basement. You crack me up!
 Title: teh Straight-faced Lou
Reviewed By: ghostwrider  On: May 14, 2005 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really have to meet Diana....loves the comment about the semi-colons and waving the stack of papers! I can sympathize! You are just too hilarious and have waaaaay toooo much time on your hands...Sue! .
 Title: o.O
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion ( :p )  On: May 14, 2005 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMFG!!! ROFLMAO & LMAO & LMAO & Giggling incessantly! ........ Still Giggling .......... Still Giggling .......... Still Giggling ..... :P
 Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2005 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O *ba-link* O.o whoa... Lol...I love the part where Nela has the stick and thwaps all of us urned ones. She does love to toture us. Lol...frankenballz. Everyone is going to think that we are all crazy. But hey "If we weren't all crazy we'd all go insane." This was just what I needed to wake up to on Saturday morning. Thanks for the mention Sue and btw, I am always good =)
 Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2005 13:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must say...the part where Diana is complaining about the semi-colons had me rolling on the floor. Poor poor Duckie and Mel. They don't know what they got themselves into, being caged. Though...Duckie caught on quick by urning people right away. Though...you sent the baby away to her dad. *sigh* I miss my babies...but obviously not enough to forget about them for a lemon. This always makes me laugh!! Thanks!
 Title: ?????
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy(not logged in)  On: May 14, 2005 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hehehee funny but. . .. . *cries* When did I get urned???? I am good!! I review! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! Don't hurt meh!!!
 Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2005 13:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are one sick mofo, Sue. lol Where the hell do you get this stuff from? ;o)
 Reviewed By: Kestral-tudorica  On: March 25, 2005 00:39 CST
Comment/Review:
whoa, mm.org has a fancy review thing. i can even play with the fonts!! This is oh so much fun. I loved the oneshots.. although all the "she"'s and the " she"'s got confusing after a while.
 Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami  On: March 23, 2005 16:31 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
There's simply too many steps from this computer to the bathroom!!! You've outdone yourself this time, LOLROTF!!!
 Title: wow.......
Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 23, 2005 16:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Dang.... I haven't laughed that hard in like 2 weeks. This is an hour after reading it and I'm still snickering about it.... Poor betas...
 Reviewed By: Pyth  On: March 23, 2005 12:16 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG, that made me laugh for like ten minutes. God, I always thought the betas must have no real life ot be able to check every thing your write (not that I mind all you publish X3) but I never quite realised they were trpped in cages in your basement. Amazing how I didn't gues that. It all makes such sense. xD
 Title: *snort - chuckle - guffaw - insane cackle*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2005 13:31 CST
Comment/Review:
This just gets better and better! *note to self; do not offer services nor send gifts to Sue with return address attached*
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