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| "Silent Moments in the Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: BakaDen On: April 17, 2005 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was absolutely adorable. I really love how you captured the strong bond between Kazuma and Kyo in your own little way. The minimum amount of dialogue between the two during those intimate times shows how the use of words isn't really necessary to express how much someone needs and cares about another, and I think you wrote that wonderfully.^^ I thought it was so cute that Kyo could still come to Kazuma for comfort, the bond never seemed to weaken because of time or because they lived separately. It seems as though when the rain comes, instead of weakening their bond or washing it away with the rest of the world, it helps it to grow stronger. Kazuma is like a lifeline that Kyo can hang on to to ride out the storm, and I think that's really cute! Great great job!XD - BakaDen.Out.^_^
| Title: Aww
Reviewed By: BizarreLoveTriangle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute.
| Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poignant is the first word that came to mind after reading this. Poignant, heart-warming, and quietly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it.
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