Title: fine
Reviewed By: radhika_best [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the way you made malfoy apologise to li. i gave you more rating in originality because nobody would have ever dreamed of malfoy ever apologising . it was, you-know , what i can say was okay. you do have the ability to improve. your ideas are very good but improve your style of writing. see ya...........
|
