| "Won't you be mine?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan On: September 08, 2005 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like!! I wish a guy would rock me to sleep like that... (horny straight gal talking) lol
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Reviewed By: Byrnstar On: June 20, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww. I love cute shorts like this. Looks like Togusa's found himself a nice big cuddly-bear... ;P
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Reviewed By: Beff On: May 26, 2005 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. Totally original and a great pairing. Some of the grammar is a bit debateable, but the content of the story more than makes up for it. I wish there were more like it, totally. Please write more!
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Reviewed By: Paranoidgirl On: May 22, 2005 08:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why is it that the best fanfic writers always put themselves down? The only thing that I found to nag about is the fact that I couldn't find the reason why Togusa was in Batou's house, but that's it. Little to no gramatical errors, nicely written, both Batou, Togusa and even the dog are in character and I agree with you that there is just to little Batou/Togusa pairing on the net. A brilliant piece of work.
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