Reviewed By: Heita_Genoufuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this a lot, but it's going a little fast. You might want to slow it down a little with a bit more description, and draw out the opening with something really clever. Great job. I give it two thumbs up.
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