| "Emerald Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: ss4shirow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is too good to be true!!!!!I love this fanfic above all else!!!!Your work is spectacular!!!!No one can fuck with the Legendary!!!! Not even Cell himself!!!!!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a really good story. I enjoyed reading it, but I will be honest with you that there were times where I thought I couldn't continue. There were many times in the story where the names were all confused but I over came that. This story is a real tear jerker. Congratulations on a good story written.
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: April 30, 2005 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I've been enjoying your story but wanted to point out a few things that might improve it. You really need a beta, for spelling and grammatical errors. You seem to confuse the views between first and third person dialogue, and a lot of your descriptions are too repetitive and some times unnecessary. I hope you take this as what it is, constructive criticism, and not as an insult. I think this story is original and interesting but the grammatical errors seriously detract from the story itself. Good luck with your future writing, you can only improve!
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Reviewed By: twackfackler On: April 30, 2005 03:29 CDT
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lol yeah it was me. yeah i wont go to your account. see you on monday dude.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 23:38 CDT
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.....how did you get my password? wait, david? is that you?it is isint it. sigh, i see what happens when i tell you about a good fic, thats y you wanted to know. lol ok just please refrain from useing my name ^_^. or ill have to change it. damn i was lucky to have to write the auther an e-mail. ok david, meet me in SC later.
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Title: twackfackler
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fucking way to end it man. i want to see like, more stories soon. so if i must......*claps*
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Reviewed By: nightmaregod On: April 28, 2005 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
truely a great story. i wander what you got instore for us now. and ... um ... fine *claps*
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Reviewed By: Kicken2500 On: April 28, 2005 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude that was fucking awsome. holy shit man, i mean seriously, that was awsome. and hey Shadow-King, i got the pic, and FUCK ITS COOL!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BROLY_ROCKS On: April 27, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the awsome'est story i have ever read about broly. that was a classic way to end it man. i hope to see other stories by you soon. yeah i agree with teh King there *claps for Majin_Broly*
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap that was an awsome ending. i mean damn that totaly mached the picture. ( and no worries all, i will send it to the rest of my 'clan' and they can send it to the rest of you. ^_^) how bout a round of applause for the story geneius: Majin_Broly. *people clap* we hope to see more stories of greatness soon.
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Reviewed By: nightmaregod On: April 25, 2005 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah epouloge. me wantie.
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Reviewed By: kicken2500 On: April 24, 2005 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude no worries. i mearly ment that it was realy cool. i just like say "pointlessly" a lot. dont worry bout it. and i was wrong, you can top what you've done. you realy are a good writer. i hope to see more chapters in the future. and yeah i think a epouloge would be nice.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter dude. yeah i kinda want an epuloge. oh yes everyone, the pic...is...without a dout...THE COOLEST PICTURE OF BROLY I HAVE EVER SEEN!!!!!!
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Title: lol indeed
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol have faith guys, he wouldnt do that, not yet anyway. ^_^ fear not.
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Reviewed By: BROLY_ROCKS On: April 23, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
huh? what thing did you send the King man? and like is the story over. case if it is, that is.........LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAME. if its not, then i apoligize for saying so.
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