Reviewed By: Eternal Serena [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very well done. The majority of Furuba fics I've read so far do not capture the characters very well. I've begun favoring YukixTohru pairings, just because the KyoxTohru pairings are not done appropriately. Your fic captures the three main characters well, and I do feel so very sorry for Yuki, but I would like to see a happy ending between Kyo and Tohru. Angst fics are wonderful, but I think this one could use a bit more closure. :)
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