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"Friendly Easter Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ]
 Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 28, 2007 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
just want you to know, this is the single greatest piece of Cream erotica ever written (me having read EVERY piece ever done) and possibly one of the best short stories on MM. good work
 Title: AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
Reviewed By: Luna The hedgehog  On: August 06, 2005 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Luna:*stares at these 3 people* oh my GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!! Saiko:*runs to luna and stares* Sonic:umm,guys why are you atarin AAAAT!!!!! *stares*AAAAAAAAMYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! Jani:ACK EEEEEWWWWW!!!!! Amy:what are you looking at were busy here! Killdove:*comes in* alrighty guyz! *taker her fave gun WARNING!:HER FAVE GUN IS CALLED THE POISONBULLET AND IT COULD CAUSE DEATH FOR THE AGES OF 12 AND OLDER!!!*WHO IS PERSON DAT DID THIS?!! all exept Killdove:*stares* killdove:*sniffs*AHAA!!! all exept Killdove:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! Killdove:It's*puts a bullet in her gun and kills amy*aaaaaamy..... Cream:WHY DID YOU KILL AMY!!!! sonic:woo-never mind, Luna:*closes her eyes*
 Title: Nice
Reviewed By: bsnow [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 14, 2005 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoy you lemon fic. It was nice. I never would think that Tails would get it on with Cream and Amy at the same time.
 Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2005 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
 Reviewed By: Miles Prower  On: April 23, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was very good! Those Chao are going to be scarred for life!
 Reviewed By: The Phantom  On: April 04, 2005 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
A great fanfic but try to put conversations between different characters on different lines to avoid confusion over who is talking. I would have thought Cream would be in her teens in this fanfic. I would love to see another one like this with the same characters or maybe with more females around Tails. Why not do a second chapter for this one?
 Reviewed By: Kimble  On: April 02, 2005 16:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
A very decent lemon! Kinda pointed (I prefer my stories with a little more meat (plot) in them), but fun to read! I will never quite understand why Tails always gets the girls, but he deserves them. n__n I'd love to see Sonic paired up with a girl or two though! Don't pay attention to that awful critic who reviewed you earlier. Yes, the age calculation was definately off, but this looks like one of your first lemons. Try writing some private stuff. It'll improve as you write more and more. Less Pokémon and more Sonic! Pretty Please? n__n Women's boobs really develop around ages 12-13. Don't be afraid to advance the ages of your lemon charachters ahead 3-5 years so that the circumstances are more believable. Yes - most people actually DO wait that long, if not longer, with doing sexual acts. I think a group of Chao gathered around Amy and Cream would have been a hilarious addition to your fic!
 Reviewed By: akira nature kitty 13  On: March 31, 2005 14:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story was okay bcuz the fact that what you wrote was a little bit crazy why would you think of something that crazy tha cream and amy did to each other but then you made them do that to tails how could you cream should be the only one to have tails why should amy have him too amy already has a man and you want her to like tails tails and cream should have their own relationship just like sonic and amy that was kind weird what you made her do to cream but still their friends let them be friends and dont let them do that nasty crap again thanks!!
 Reviewed By: Shade-The-Hedgehog [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well it's my favourite parings AmyxTailsxCream but the age thing gets me Cream was only 10. If you do another threesome with these characters which I hope you do please make them older as it is it's the age thing makes it wrong
 Reviewed By: blue harinezumi  On: March 28, 2005 00:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty funny. Now you should do a Sonic/Amy! Sonamy is the best!
 Title: PURE BULLSHIT.
Reviewed By: Just guess...  On: March 27, 2005 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
I am normally a fan of your writing, but this was probably... A: writing of a hormone-charged 12-year-old B: Kiddie porn supporter??? Maybe it was... C: Strong hemp-based substance. Cream's 10, dammit!! This was just a tasteless dabble, even for hentai.It was a child molester's dream or something. Don't get me wrong, I normally like your stories, I've read most of them. No, I'm not flaming your story, just saying it was... wrong. Just fucking wrong. Sick kiddie porn/furry porn story? No, you're too good for this, Espio 2004. Far to good to write this. I hope this didn't offend you, it was just another stupid review by another stupid person who won't matter in the next five years. But still, you are a great writer.
 Reviewed By: Mr. Xebec  On: March 26, 2005 23:42 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was precious.... simply precious

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