Title: reality is illusion prologue
Reviewed By: newkid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 13:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is nice, though check for typo... sorry to comment on that... much of my writing is typos too.. XD I won't say it is hard to understand... but could you simplify it down a bit more so other ppl might get a better statement of ur prolouge? It is an interesting prolouge I must say... very intriguing... makes me wanna read more... yet can also makes me feel a little dull... but I'm gonna read more of it... :D =^_^= newkid
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