| "The Awakening" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 12:30 CDT
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Yeah...you really DID have me fooled there when Allister and Raphael just changed sides! ^_^; Glad that everyone's all right, and I'm going to read the sequel now! -zooms over to the sequel and plops herself down-
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 19:48 CDT
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Yay! Another chappie on the same day! ^_^ I learned some new things in this chappie. O.O 1)Valon cries 2) Raphael and Allister can apologize 3) Raphael and Allister can change sides against Dartz so quickly. Update soon! Can\'t wait for the fight to begin...Mwahahaha!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 11:01 CDT
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Great! Maybe Kaiba and Joey can call out THEIR Legenday Dragons and they can all work together to free Kisara who frees everyone else? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 07:48 CDT
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:)
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 16:41 CDT
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Glad to ssee the update! And, Christ's (or Chris's) wolf's name is spelled Skye with an 'E'. You spelled it without. Just to let you know! ^_^ Looking foward to the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lady Nightshadows keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 19:57 CST
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:D woot more reviews (lol) My comoputer wont let me see new reviews for some reason, so I just type random messages so I can see what people are commenting about on the story :D:D:D
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that good! can't wate till you update! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 10:53 CST
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I'm happy my story is coming along really well. I have a new chapter or two coming sometime this weekend or next week =D
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 10:37 CST
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YAY! You updated! Thanks for not making Valon the ultimate evil one! ^_^ So...Kisara's finally gonna tell Kaiba who she is! Can't wait to see what'll happen!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 06:44 CST
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Vedy vedy good! However, could you lighten up on Valon please? *gives you adorable puppy eye look* He IS the whole clown of the series...besides Joey that is. Raphael and Allister can get beat up as much as you want...just lay off Valon? *extra adorable puppy eyes* Lookin foward to next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 07:01 CST
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So awesome! *in corny Dartz accent* The Great Leviathan shall not rise again! *in normal voice/typing, I guess* That was great! I can't wait for the next chappie!
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