| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: kocoum On: July 04, 2005 21:48 CDT
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agh! oh my gawsh, sorry about the mistakes on the picture.. lol, i draw another one :] i love this chapter.. heeh, she goes comando everywhere? oooh chyeah, i'll send you the new cain & gin pic i drew after my cousins stop bugging me... ttfn ta ta for now
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who is once again not signed in On: July 04, 2005 19:16 CDT
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O.O Oh my. Poor Kich. Hehehe. Gin is the best. She's so innocent it's almost frustrating, but it's also cute. The fangirly side of me keeps screaming at Cain, "KISS HER ALREADY!! GET TOGETHER!! OH EMM GEE!!" Whereas the writer side of me knows that you no doubt have a very deliberate plotline that will still culminate in a way that makes my fangirly side happy. Of course, no one ever said my fangirly side was reasonable. ...Eagerly awaiting next Monday, and the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 18:51 CDT
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Ooooh.... Belle's panty secret is out. It's good that Kich came in time. I shudder at the thought if he hadn't.
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Reviewed By: liquidstar On: July 04, 2005 18:34 CDT
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Purity 4 is my favorite of the series so far. ^_^ I really wanted to ask you this though, and I'm not sure if you've answered it before, but do you ever get writers block? I write fanfiction and it takes me months to get new chapters up, but you seem to write a chapter every few days or so. How do you do it? Any advice?
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Title: Chapter 34
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: July 04, 2005 17:41 CDT
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heh 'can i see your stuff'...now it's Cain's turn to say something with a double meaning! I love how Gin is fingerpainting...I love how she finds such enjoyment from such small things. Her pretending to be cain was hilarious!! I love how she kept adding different words when she'd call herself Cain...virile, lolol. heh, Cain is so bad!! The whole thing with belle and Kich was great too, jealous kich is kind of fun! The ending was so perfect too, what a shock for kich to find out! hehe. Great chapter!
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Title: damn!
Reviewed By: fudge On: July 04, 2005 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story I just don't know don't know how else to say it's great! PLEASE update soon! Amazing job!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 15:09 CDT
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Holy crap....150 words a minute? That's fast!!!! I really liked this chapter...just makes you wonder what else is going to come up...Gin's teasing was cute...I wonder when Cain will show her that sculpture?
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: July 04, 2005 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im still here and all. Great updates and all. Nothing else to say and all. Have a good 4th of July. Fireworks rule!!! (Including home made ones.)
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Reviewed By: darksquire* On: July 04, 2005 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Kich must be having a really hard time. Ha! Well both couples are getting just a bit closer all the time. I love it! Can't wait till the next one! Hurray!
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Reviewed By: Amargo Scribe On: July 04, 2005 13:14 CDT
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Gotta respect someone who knows how to type :) Did I mention that I am REALLY enjoying the Belle/Kichiro drama? For whatever reason, I seem to really go for that awkward, bitterharsh tension that you're so good at building. Can't wait to see the next one!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 12:26 CDT
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Ha! Gin is going to be the total destruction of Cain, isn't she? He's gonna be in a room somewhere slamming his head against the wall, babbling, isn't he? That's just too rich... painting teal stripes on her sides! Poor Kich... he's at his wits end? Belle will be the death of him! I love the way you handle those two... both pretty powerful in their own rights! You do a beautiful job! Thanks again for sharing your beautiful work with us.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 11:00 CDT
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Very nice bambina. Can't wait for more. Poor Belle though, I don't think that she didn't *think* they were going to hurt her like that so much as it seemed that she didn't want to *believe* that they would. That and perhaps the confrontation of it all, no one ever taught her to defend hersef physically and without that...just glad Kich got to her before anything serious happened. Btw, how are you? Are you doing better?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 02:50 CDT
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HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY!!!!! Hope you have a good one!!!!
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Title: Chapter 33
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: July 03, 2005 10:28 CDT
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ahh yes, very good chapter indeed!! I love that Kich is starting to realize that she's 'the one' and that he can't just use his normal methods of charm on her but that she's worth it. I love the title of this chapter, it fits so perfectly with them! Hahahaha, and the phone conversation with Belle and what's not being sucked...that's too funny!! That whole conversation was hilarious! Belle-y Button is such a cute nickname for her! lolol. I hope that you and your family are doing well, Sue, you guys are still in my prayers :) ::big hug!::
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Reviewed By: darksquire(notloggedin) On: July 02, 2005 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! You never fail to delight us do you? I am so excited to see what happens next!
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