| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 22, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
she is afraid of mice? i can't wait till cain admits he really likes gin and i was wondering which couple do you like writing about the most the cain/gin or the kich/belle realation. anyway great story so far i think this might be the longest purity story.
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Title: About my last review...
Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's totally fine!!! I thought I would ask! No big deal! HOWEVER... as for my questions... do you think that you could email the answers to me? I promise not to reveal anything! :P I don't mean to bug... I'm just curious, that's all! My email is bradhadair89@yahoo.com or tigresa_diablo@yahoo.com... let me know if I'm bugging you! I hate being a nuisance! Anyway... super story! I still admire your creativity!
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Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 16:57 CDT
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'Big-big-big-rat-bi-i-ig-Cain!' That was great! So Cain "saves" Gin from the big rat, I can't wait to see what happens with Kich and Belle. Hopefully he'll save her from an attacker, anything but a big rat. Good chapter. Keep em coming.
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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 22, 2005 14:29 CDT
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awwwww poor Gin!! At first her reaction to the mouse was kind of funny, but then I saw how scared she was and I felt so bad for her! Boy Ryo and Kich were SO mean! What a horrible trick to play on a child, no wonder she's afraid of rodents! Cain is so cute with her though, so comforting and patient, it's so sweet ^_^ I just love seeing how their relationship develops with each chapter, it's such a neat thing. And I liked Cain's reflection at the beginning...poor guy, that had to have been so hard. I loved him saying 'daddy loves you' when he was thinking of Belle, that was so sweet. Great chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: June 22, 2005 14:08 CDT
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Sorry that I haven't had the chance to review lately. "Real life" is horrible these days and reading your latest chapters is one of the few bright spots (thanks!). Poor Gin - I can so empathize with the rodent-phobia (I almost didn't manage to get my laundry done yesterday because there was a cricket in the laundry area - AHHHH!). There's been so much great stuff going on lately, but I just had to comment on the "Kich is gay" teasing. Where have I heard this before? ;-) LMAO
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 13:20 CDT
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Aww...she must get the rat trait from her mom...How do you do it? One minute I'm crying the next I'm laughing...I love how you can do it though!! Poor Cain, it's almost the full moon, Gin is in his arms and Belle is gone...I feel sorry for him.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 13:19 CDT
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That was really sweet. I loved that. Can't wait for more! :-D
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 12:06 CDT
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poor cain [lol] and poor gin with her rat phobia...heh but that was pretty funny for the tai-youkai of america getting rid of a little rat hah but pretty mean of gin's brothers
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(not logged in) On: June 22, 2005 12:03 CDT
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hehe awsome chapters, update soon as you can, ja ne, Zirra
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 11:08 CDT
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*chuckle* Gin's...rat...a hanyou that could probably take down a lion bare-handed...afraid of a tiny, little mouse. Awww, the *snort* poor baby. You are so right, Cain is a sucker. Ryo and Kich...evil big brothers. Mine did something like that to me...with Black Widow spiders. *shudder* I think I was 4. Now I hunt them with extreme prejudice. Favorite weapon: broom.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 08:17 CDT
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Rodents, don't like them much either. It's so nice of Cain to capture and dispose/throw away the mouse for Gin. : )
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 22, 2005 01:49 CDT
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Excellent, I love payback. Sweet, sweet revenge. You gave me warm and fuzzies...And you gotta love guys ogoling their crushes in swimsuits! That was fun to read. I'm so glad you updated, Cant wait for another one!
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Title: ROFLMAO!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 01:19 CDT
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Oh Toga! You sure topped the "beefcake" debacle...only it was Ryo that set you up, not Kich. Hmm...does that mean that Kich's revenge will happen to Ryo? Nah, that's just too twisted. *snort* Uncle Sess trying to keep a straight face and Belle's blase bombshell of, "Oh, him? He doesn't count. He's Gay." The little dvd viewing only clinched the deal. Belle got her way and is accompanying Kich to the States. Well, maybe Kich will realize that he will have endless opportunities to fix Belle's opinion of him. Gay indeed. He knows that she knows he isn't gay...but maybe...actions speak louder than words...maybe he'd be better off showing her how un-gay he is. -- On a lighter note, Cain just got flattened by the pool...and so did his youkai; `Gin . . . wet . . . Cain?' When an inner 'voice' becomes speechless or incoherent, you know trouble's brewing! LOL
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 00:30 CDT
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Oh this should be VERY interesting....I hope it spices up when Kich and Belle go to America. I'm so going to love these next chapters!!!!
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Reviewed By: TenshiKaika On: June 21, 2005 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gin's such a doll...I love her. She's so innocent and naive. And yet...really cool. I love it when she says those funny things to Cain. Like when she told him to do her later. LOL I had this funny vision where she was wondering what "Voulez-vous coucher avec moi" in the song ment and Cain told her... hmm... this sounded so much more funnier when I was listening to the song...now it sounds stupid... oh well! Love the story!
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