| "Bitter Sweet Tragedy" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: DeadlSoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG its been sooooooooo long, too long in fact! I FINALLY found this story again*does happy dance and clings to it for dear life*! I thought it was lost forever, its been over a year and Im DIEING to read the next chapter! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! or if you dont want to finish it, have someone else write it maybe, but then it wouldnt be the same *sad face* :( Im begging you to finish this great story! it a really good one and id hate to see it left alone and unfinished! ONEGAI!!!!!!(that means please in Japanese) thank you for taking the time to read this XD ja ne
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...this was really good. A few spelling mistakes but still good. I got a little confused on a bit of it, but it's starting to make sense. Ja ne! Ao
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 16:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I just finished chapter 9... oh my...... Thats all i can say... really.. Woah... no... \"WOW\".... And for me to just say \"WOW\" about something is huge. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN BECAUSE I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY. ^_^
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to skip alot of details since its late so I'm just going to say: That everything you did(i.e grammar, spelling, blah blah) was great. And now for me: I only read until chapter 6 but I just had to write a review now! So please update as soon as you can and I can't wait for the next chapters that I'm gonna read! ^_^
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 22:03 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW thats all i can think of to say. wait i've got it.....I love ur story!!!!! u did hve a couple of errors in grammer but thats ok. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lesa(inu-kag15) On: June 25, 2005 21:18 CDT
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okay, I've finally finished reading what you have so far and It's getting really good, LoL....I can't wait till you write more, i'm starting to get an addiction!
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Title: 1 Thumb Up and 1 To The Side
Reviewed By: inuyasha&kagome=love On: June 25, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's beyond a doubt an original story and I enjoyed what you have so far...but I admit you need to work on it a bit. I understand this story is meant to be confusing, but please try to keep the time passed in check. I noticed a few times where you made it seem that kagome knew this mysterious guy (inuyasha) for a long time although I think the way your story is, they have only known each other for a few hours at tops. Please try to re-read chapters before posting them, of course that being said, I enjoyed the concept of the story and the darkness of it all! Keep improving this story! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 16:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
really good...LoL..that dreams creep though, keep updating!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: destinys_darkangel823 On: June 25, 2005 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i love your story it realy cool. this story is different(in a good way) i'v never read anything like it!well keep it up!update a.s.a.p! thats all ~ja-ne~n_n
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: May 26, 2005 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so nevermind--my plot bunny is nothing like your story! Eek, what a bitch that woman was. I like your story, but you need to 1) use a spell-checker, 2)learn the difference between their, they're, and there, 3)read over your chapter when you're done writing it, because you're making funny spelling mistakes like "women" when you mean "woman" and stuff like that. Your grammar got pretty bad this last chapter, and that throws a reader right out of the story. But anywho, I think you've got a good idea going. Dunno how you're going to fix Kagome's broken leg in a hell-hole, though. If left in that condition, a person could develop gangrene, and that's bad. :) Happy writing!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: May 26, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only on Chapter One, but it's a fascinating idea. I've had a plot-bunny along the same lines, but I haven't had time to develop. Now, seeing that there's another one out there that's like it...ish, I don't have to!!! :) But honestly, nice job. I will continue reading. Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: kristen_krity On: May 17, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really loving your story! It's so sad in parts! I'm a little confused though. Kagome's talking about how this guy was always mean to her and the "mother" comes to ebat the guy up and kagome defends him. She acts as if shes known him for a long time but it's only been part of a day right? well...if you coula answer that question i would be greatly appreciated. Update soon! Kristen
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