Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 21:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi, me again. I'll start out with negative, that way the positive sounds better. ^^;;; *sigh* Anyway, I was thrown off when you kept on changing tenses. It kind of went from present to past to present again to future. O.o But that's ok. And easy to fix. Again with my nit-picky grammar/spelling/etc. stuff, same as the last time (my review for the poem one). ^^;;;; So, on to the positives! ^_^ Again, great pairing (you gotta love the yaoi). The story line was original, even if short. I say it's short and sweet. XD Quite litterally. Love the fluff at the end. I'm such a sap for fluff. ^^;;; Yeys, you made Anzu and Yami break up! ^_^ I'm one of the many Anzu-haters. (>.> evil friendship-ranting freak) Sorry if you like her. So, overall, great fic! Happy writings and again, I hope to see more from you. ~Rikoh-chan~
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