| "Falling For the First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Karla On: November 16, 2001 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
What, this is it? pah! Well written, but it's TOO SHORT!!! Do you have any idea how hard it is to find any type of fiction about Krillin and 18? (or whatever you call them) ARGH!
WRite another one! Please? |
Reviewed By: Sailor Libra On: November 16, 2001 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
IT's GOOD! So the author better not beat themselves up about it. It's perfect. Don't touch it. Anyone who says otherwise just has a very wrong opinion. |
Reviewed By: Ysabet On: November 17, 2001 23:15 CST
Comment/Review:
It's me again.... and WHERE is the next part??? C'mon, write it! write it!! Hey--- what about *her* thoughts on the matter, hmm? @_@ |
