| "Pride or Love" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 03:54 CST
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ah i think that doctor is going to be sued. i really like kuwabara stories, to make it easier for you to type just type kuwa and then use find & replace.
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 19:47 CST
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that was really good.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 23, 2005 16:38 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Spirit Bagel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a valliant attempt at drama, but I can't help feeling that it came off a bit... contrived. I don't know exactly why. Perhaps it was the way Kuwabara was with the doctor, or the implausability of the neglegence of Dr. Ishimuro. Still, your style has potential, and I encourage you to explore more orginal fanfiction ideas and try new things. Best of look.
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 19:45 CDT
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That was a very good story! But...I don't think Kurama can get sick. Oh well, at least it was a...intersting story! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 21:08 CDT
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that was a pretty cool story. wonderful writing, there. youa actually made me get pissed off at the insensitive jacka$$ of a doctor. he really ticked me off. i mean, how dare he?! ugh! at least Hiei got him back, though. and Kurama's okay. i really liked the comraderie showed between Kuwabara and Hiei in here, too. it was nice seeing them together not trying to bite each other's heads off. and it was nice to see Kuwabara in a good light. not too many stories can do that. i'm not a Kuwa-lover or anything but it was really nice. great job!
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: mood swinger On: April 26, 2005 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww....it was sooooo sweet i loooooved it soooooo much, you are so inspiring to people who plan on writing their own fan fics like me dont worry i wont copy your ideas
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 11, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really liked this - it wasn't too preachy or anything. It's good for people to be aware. And the story was cute and sweet, too. I'm glad Kurama is OK.
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Reviewed By: kyoroxmysox (not signed in) On: April 07, 2005 20:17 CDT
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i read bugs and wanted to read other stuff u did...this was great! ive never even thought of giving them aids, thats really kool...well not to them...but for a story line....yeah...n e wayz...i hate kuwabara, i dont know how other people like him, but he was cool in this fic. loved it!! update bugs!!! LATERZ!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 06, 2005 20:34 CDT
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HA HA!!!! The perfect ending to the perfect story.... Thank you for writing something with Kuwabara in it!!! Kuwa-chan and Yukina are my favorite characters in Yu Yu. I mean, I don't tihnk Kuwa's cute or anything like that, but he's so sweet and big-hearted and awkward and adorable!!! So I'm glad Kuwa-chan got a story written with him as an important part of it....that never happens!!! Well, except by my sister's friend Lisa (who hasn't updated in forever) and now you. Yay! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: April 06, 2005 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT! Kuwa-chan rox, too. most people hate him. i dunno why. anyway, this was yet another great fic! you have so many of them...helps when the fluff is down. ^__^ and i liked the moral, too. it was a nice touch. The whole 'torching the doctor's car' thing was good advice too...i've always wanted to do something along those lines. i'm gonna go read 'bugs' now! update 'bugs' and 'coming clean' soon, ya? *waves and runs off'
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 15:33 CDT
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Beautiful story...im pissed at the doctor tho...
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. I've gotta appreciate something that makes Kuwabara look good, seeing as how very few people take the time. Looks like you wrote this very quickly, am I right? There are some obvious typos, that's the only reason I would think that. But it's still a very good story, and I still like it very much.
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