Reviewed By: J.R.Karsten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good overall. I got tired with all the names, they've been used. I like the magic thing, but the moves of Earth Realm would be ok. Over all, I got kind of hooked on what was next, but I'm not sure it was an good idea for the ending. Still, if you just said they were from where they really were to the Scouts, I'd have no truoble in liking this more.
Good story, just needed more. |
