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| "FAKE in Love: Act V, Betrayal and Resurrection" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Continued Review
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 19:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
I hope that u got more ideas and that there will be a FAKE VI, and so on and so forth. U've got such talent so don't waste it!! I'm serious. Everytime I check my email and I find that u have another FAKE act, I nearly want to jump up and down like a giddy child on Christmas. As embarrassing as it sounds, I nearly had a heart attack when I saw that Act V was complete. I started reading right away and refused to stop til I was finished. >< I am such a fan!!! *bows to u* Please don't stop writing!! U really are a true FAKE author!! I LOVE ur work so much!!! Well now, I think I have finally ran out of things to say, so I'll take my leave. As always, I'm looking foward to reading ur future work. Best of luck on writing ur fics. Hope to hear from u soon!! ^_^
| Title: U've Left Me Amazed And Speechless
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grumpy Demon, I have got to tell u straight foward that this was one of ur best works yet, by far!! The more u write, the better u get and I'm left amazed everytime!! I'm so happy that this fic was more toward Dee and his feelings. U showed what a beautiful and wonderful person he really is inside. I almost cried at some of the scenes when his emotions were real strong. Hell I'll admit, I had tears in my eyes when Martin told Dee that Ryo was there. It was like, I could really feel his emotions and picture this all in my head. I really felt his world shatter...U've done such a great job with Dee's character and I really commend u for it. Thank you so much for giving me this reading experience. Now then, onward to more great comments for this fic. First off, I must say ur lemons are really improving and the passion between Dee and Ryo is obviously getting stronger. Ryo is really becoming more foward with his love making and I can imagine it will become even stronger as time passes. Soon, I'll bet he'll be able to tell Dee what he wants. Second, I love how u made the relationships between the characters. I love the fact that Dee and Bicky really do have a strong relationship, even though they bicker all the time. I'm real glad that Rose finally will stop chasing after Ryo and will now consider him as a brother. It seems that every scene in this story was perfect. Such wonderful and one of a kind work. I'll NEVER tire of ur fics.
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