| "FAKE in Love: Act V, Betrayal and Resurrection" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: It's me again
Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2013 14:18 EDT
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Hey there! I totally forgot to review Act IV, shame on me. But I'm back again! I really like how you describe the interaction between Ryo and Dee, but nevertheless it was interesting to see how they deal without each other, which happened quite a lot in Act IV and V. I also congratulate you for putting Dee more into focus this time ;) And oh my God, can you imagine how I cried when Dee thought that Ryo was dead? That was absolutely heart-breaking. If I didn't know there is an Act VI, I really wouldn't have been so sure if this was a death fic or not! Who I start to feel sorry for is Rose. As annoying as he may be sometimes, he's really not that different from Dee - loving Ryo but not having a chance to get close to him. (Well, this is one of the things that distinguishes Rose from Dee: Dee DOES get close to Ryo!) But all in all, Rose isn't a bad guy. I wonder what will become of him, especially since you made Drake and Diana a couple. Diana belongs to Rose, and Drake belongs to JJ! Well, that's my opinion anyway. Oh, one more thing that I enjoyed very much were Dee's insecurities and how he thought if maybe he and Jess were more alike than he always believed. I've never thought about it like this, so it was a nice insight into his troubled mind. So thank you, thank you again for writing this amazing series, and I'll go read Act VI now! See ya! ;) |
Title: Me again
Reviewed By: jdr1184 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have only recently found this site which is why I'm spamming your comments section. The only concrit I can offer is that at times the Drake/Diana story line seems forced. I like almost evil Rose so I am hoping you don't make him too nice. Ryo like a brother, who Rose want to have sex with is kind of disturbing. I loved every interaction between Ryo and Dee and I especially loved that Dee didn't kill Martin because of his responisbility to Biks. He knows what it means to be alone. It made me cry. I hope your happy. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry sugar that I dont have time to leave the proper review you deserve but I want to get started on the next one since my time is highly limited well it on to the next act for me see your there!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yurathewicked On: August 14, 2005 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ack! so wonderful! i cant believe it took me so long to find your fanfics~ but i'm so glad i did. you had me in tears when martin told dee that ryo was dead. i mean, even though i knew he couldnt be (because of your continued posts) i STILL ended up going for the tissue box. you really manage to get your readers emotionally divested in the characters. i would tell you to get these works published in some sort of anthology or something, but i dont really know where you would go to do something like that. anyways, these fictions are really really really appreciated, thanks for taking the time to do something so great!
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So hooked! I'm going to regret this in the morning. It's 1 am now and I'm heading over to Act VI.
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Reviewed By: shiva14b On: May 24, 2005 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your writings. It's easy to get cheezy with the romance stuff, but someone how you always manage to keep it from doing so, and the story itself is interesting and well written. I really like to read it! Considering I usually skip straight to the lemon, that's saying a lot. Speaking of which, wonderful lemons. Sometimes it's hard to make the uke the seme without the story feeling weird, but on the occasions you've done it you pull it off beautifully. Looking forward to the nezt update!
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Reviewed By: Enzeru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 12:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one had me really sitting on needles. It was so nervthrilling. While reading it it felt like watching a action movie, well You get 5 A's ocf 5 possible. *A A A A A*
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Reviewed By: rat killer On: April 20, 2005 10:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just recently came across your fic. It's great. What I like most is that caracter are so similar to what I felt when reading the manga. Really good work and I'm looking foward to read more.
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 10:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah... I forgot to add that your lemons are so good they give me chills! ^___^ AWESOME!!!!
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 09:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I really really thought he was gone! I felt so bad for Dee...and it was awesome how he thought of Bikky, and what Ryo would have wanted him to do, and restrained himself from killing that slimey creep Martin. I swear, your fics are THE best!!!!
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Reviewed By: Spunky87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all the acts that you have written. However, this one scared me the most, i was so sure that Ryo was dead! Anyway please keep writing, i love this "series" and the way that you post the story all together and completed.
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Reviewed By: KtBug On: April 10, 2005 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your series. YOu've got to be the best FAKE author I've ever read. Seriously. Just thought you should know that. Please hurry up with the next one. I love how you torture "sexy little Ryo". :-)
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Title: I Plead The Fifth
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 02:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GD - Once again, you have managed to create a work of fiction for FAKE that was simultaneously original, engaging, breathtaking, clever and unbelievably sensual at the same time. With this 5th Act, you have proven yourself to be not only one of the most creative and talented writers out there, but one of the most consistent as well. With each Act you post, it seems as if your talent and skill only increase. This was one of your best Acts yet. How you expand upon Dee and have him reflect upon his past and current life, the tough choices that you have him make, all while giving him an internal dialogue that is honest and touching. FANTASTIC! Reading this act, you feel as if you have taken this journey with Dee. I feel that many writers have short-changed Dee in the past, so it is no small accomplishment on your part that you created such a rich emotional context for Dee to draw from, which was powerful and complex. You expand upon Dee's relationship with both Bikky and Ryo as well, and as always it was done with passion, honesty and gentleness. You keep our favourite characters so very in character while giving them unbelievable depth and strength. You have them struggle through difficult situations while making tough decisions in a way that makes sense. And your lemons - Oh my god. You flat out do the BEST lemons on the web, plain and simple. They're unbelievably sexy and hot, while also being very emotional and tender. Keep up the great work! I can't wait for Act VI!
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 06:17 EDT
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I was so happy to see this fic! I haven't had a chance to read this Act, or Act IV yet, because of crazy life. ...but I've printed out both parts... and as I have to spend the day at the hospital on Monday when a family member is having surgery, this is going to be a great way to pass the time. I'll write a real review when I finish them. ^___^
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Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: April 08, 2005 19:43 EDT
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I must say that I believe that this is your best story so far. You really gave these characters a second personality which played very well into this story. Just your story plot was very thought out which made it very interesting to read about. I was also impressed with the length of it. Though it was worth it. I hope to see you still writing and cant wait to read them.
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